Please correct me
I did discussion about "Japanese City Passes Law Against Eating While Walking"
Please correct my English.

Question1: What are your thoughts on Kamakura's law against eating while walking?

I think it would be good law.
I understand people enjoy to eating while walking when they go on trip or go to the food market.I am one of them though.
But in places crowded,we better to stop it to avoid getting dirty their closes by bump together and it getting more make crowd because they would walk slowly.

2:Do you think it's bad manners to eat while walking? Why? Why not?
It is depend on the situation.
When I was in Japan,I had been thinking it is bad manners to eat while walking anywhere outside include on the food market.
But since I started to go to foreign country I getting use to eat while walking when I go to a festival or food market because it is very fun.But if we do ,we have to follow the rule for example throw waste away in garbage.

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Please correct me
I did discussion about "Japanese City Passes Law Against Eating While Walking"
Please correct my English.

Question1: What are your thoughts on Kamakura's law against eating while walking?

I think it would be good law.
I understand people enjoy to eating while walking when they go on trip or go to the food market.I am one of them though.
But in places crowded,we better to stop it to avoid getting dirty their closes by bump together and it getting more make crowd because they would walk slowly.

2:Do you think it's bad manners to eat while walking? Why? Why not?
It is depend on the situation.
When I was in Japan,I had been thinking it is bad manners to eat while walking anywhere outside include on the food market.
But since I started to go to foreign country I getting use to eat while walking when I go to a festival or food market because it is very fun.But if we do ,we have to follow the rule for example throw waste away in garbage.

Answer

I think it would be a good law.
I understand people enjoy eating while walking when they go on a trip or go to the food market. I am one of them though.
But in crowded places, we should stop it to avoid getting our clothes dirty when bumping together (and it getting more make crowd because they would walk slowly) - not sure what you are trying to say here.

2:Do you think it's bad manners to eat while walking? Why? Why not?
It depends on the situation.
When I was in Japan, I thought it was bad manners to eat while walking anywhere outside, including the food market.
But since I started to visit foreign countries I am getting used to eating while walking, like when I go to a festival or food market because it is fun. But if we do, we have to follow the rules, for example, throw your waste away in the garbage.