Hi Khaled, You could say this in a casual conversation in the USA, and people would completely understand you. In formal writing, you should use the sentence in the previous answer to your question. The biggest problems in this written sentence is that "in" is not capitalized at the beginning of your sentence and "Few" should not be capitalized.

It should be: In my country, few people follow the rules of the road. I hope this helps. If you would like, feel free to look at my profile and classes offered. And feel free to message me at anytime if you’d like to have lessons with me.