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Do I (woman) Need Patience? Do I (woman) Need Patience? Hey everyone, can you please correct my grammar i.e coma, article (the) etc… mistakes with red colour if possible. Many thanks I married to my boyfriend after the three years of relation. It was the fantastic moment of my life, when I first met him. He is an intelligent man, worked hard, have great sense of humour. It has been seven years to our marriage. We have a beautiful girl, name Madeleine. I got suspicious one evening, when my husband came late home. I asked him, why did he come late? He replied, that our relation can’t survive without the mutual trust, stayed quiet, went to him room. It has been few days, and he didn’t tell me, why did he come late at that night. He is a teacher, and always gives preference to professionalism. I have never seen him hanging around with any other woman, but I don’t know why I am feeling not comfortable, until he tells me about that evening. Should I keep quiet for few days, or should I still ask him until I get my answer? I don’t know what to do. Can someone help me?
2013年2月8日
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Who Am I? Can someone share his feeling with me? Who Am I? Can someone share his feeling with me?
2013年2月7日
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Am I Ignorant, or Arrogant Can someone please correct my grammar mistakes. Many thanks Am I Ignorant, or Arrogant The day, I was born, was a memorable day in my life. I spent the nine months in my mother’s womb, and finally come to this world. My mother used to be very ill during her pregnancy, she stayed three months in the hospital, and finally had an operation at my birth. The doctor, our family friend, told me, that my mother was nearly going to die at my birth. She suffered a lot during her pregnancy, and particularly at my birth. I have grown up, but could not help my mother. I have been to the prison five times since the age of 17 years. I do not listen to her, when she asked me not to do wrong things. I failed my exams, and escaped the death, when I was driving the stolen car. I don’t know, what has happened to me. Am I ignorant, or arrogant?
2013年2月4日
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Grammar Mistakes Hi, would you don’t mind to correct mu mistakes (grammar: come, indefinite article etc…), so I can learn better English. Looking after Parents I remembered the days, when my father dropped me off to the school, and picked me up. The temperature used to be 42 degree Celsius. He rod me on his bicycle, and put a small piece of a cold wet cloth on his head to escape from the sun, when he dropped me off to the school. He (my father) struggled all of his life to support my education. He was a factory worker, and earing £30 a month. As a result of his struggle, I completed my graduation from one of the UK’s best universities. He is now 64, weak and retired. He has never asked me to come back and, helped him. I am struggling to find a job, which can help me to lead a better future. I am feeling guilty, that I could not do what he has done for me. Whereas, he spent all of his life struggled for me. I don’t know what to do in this situation. Can someone help me, what should I do? How can I look after him, when I am looking for a job away from my home country? The economic situations are worst in my home country. Than you, Zoy
2013年2月4日
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Another great teacher. Very helpful and have lot of patience. Another great teacher. Very helpful and have lot of patience.
2012年11月15日
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Right to Die Please check my grammar and punctuation mistake. I would appreciate if you also introduce some new word of vocabulary as my vocabulary is very basic. I was reading a news on BBC on-line services, some body asked the court right to die permission. The court in the UK refused it due to some legal reasons. Whereas in Switzerland some medical clinic offer this service to accommodate their patient. Since then I was thinking if God has given you a life he is the only one who has the right to take it back. Who (human) are we to decide to take our lives? Is it not immoral? I understand we want to ease our pain and sufferings from the disease. But he (God) has given us those suffering. Why can't we bear it and succeed in our test for these hardships? Everything is given by the God. He knows if a human can bear it or not. That's why he only gives you that much what we can bear. Can someone help? What do you think? Thanks
2012年9月10日
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Never Trust Anyone Please correct my grammar and punctuation mistakes. I was talking to someone and he advised me never trust anyone'. I asked him even your parents and your life partners. He replied I said never trust anyone. He also gave me an example that a father put his on wall and asked him to jump down. The son said I can't he said I will catch you don't worry. Just jump. When son jumped down he didn't catch him. He asked his father you promised me you will catch me. He replied didn't you remember I said never trust any one. I am bit confused shall we really don't trust our parents and loved ones'. Can anyone help?
2012年9月10日
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I like exploring different cultures.
2012年9月9日
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