Is this description ok? The umbrella man was an elderly person in his late seventies. This was a short man of low height. As a result of the fact that he was advanced in years added to his small stature, his appareance was the one of a feeble, frail man. The umbrella man had a face or rosy complexión and wrinkled skin. Apart from this, he also had a very thin moustache and thick fair eyebrows. The tiny man,who was weating fine clothes and an expensive silk umbrella , gave the impression of being a rich man. As regards his personality, this clever character,seemed not only wel-mannered but also very friendly. This impression is the result of his proper use of language. On the contrary, he was not a gentleman but a smart trickster of corrupted morality.

could anybody correct me, please? “The way up to heaven” is a story about an affluent elderly couple who lived in New York City. Mr Foster and Mrs Foster had been married for more tan thirty years and the woman had always been not only and obedient but also a devoted wife. Apart from this, the Fosters had an only child living in Paris with her husband and three children. Though Mrs Foster had never seen the chidren, she loved them deeply. The old woman desired to live with them. The wife had a pathological fear of being late while her husband seemed to enjoy making her feel nervous because he used to delay the poor woman any time she had to go out. This attitude was something that Mrs Foster suspected from. On this particular occasion Mrs Foster was going to visit her daughter. Before leaving Mr Foster tormented his wife by making her wait for him. Later, as a consequence of the foggy day, the flight was postponed until the next day. After had been given the bad news, Mrs Foster took a taxi in order to get back home for the night. The next morning she was ready to depart. Previous to going to take the flight, she would have to drop her husband at his club, although it was not on her way to the airport. Once in the car he pretended having forgotten a gift for his daughter and entered the house since he wanted to look for it. A moment after, the woman found the gift in the car and went to tell Mr Foster that she had the present, but before getting into the house she stopped, straining to hear something. Then she rushed to the car and ordered the driver to make the way to the airport. Mrs Foster made her flight and had a wonderful visit. Finally, she returned home and entered the six-stored house where noticed a peculiar odour. Satisfied, she phoned the elevator repairman because it was out of order. Mrs Foster had let her husband to die in the stucked lift.

Please correct me. Mr Wilson was a rich family's gardener. Every day, he used to water the park which belonged to the family that he worked for. He also lived there in a charming cabin with his wife and two naughty sibblings, Mary and Samuel. A hot summer afternoon while the children were looking for some fun, their father went for a rest and fell asleep relied on a nearby tree. The man had forgotten the hose connected to the tap. Little Mary proposed her brother to play a joke on their father. She wanted to hide the hose, but in the moment she grabbed the hose with her hands, the girl realized that the water was flowing out strongly. Mary couldn't avoid it and wet the gardener. In the end, Samuel turned off the tap. Although they hadn't done it on purpose, their father punished the children and told them he wouldn't buy them ice-cream until the end of the summer.

Short story, please need corrections. A beautiful spring morning Mrs and Ms Specter went to spend the sunny day camping near to a lake. Ar 11 o'clock in the morning they decided to rent a bote and went fishing. Ms Specter was anxious to eat luch. Suddenly, her husband catched a big fish and as he was trying to grab it her wife lost her valuable watch into the water. Finally, they went back to their tent. The inconsolable woman couldn't stop crying ;an hour later, meanwhile the man was preparing the frying-pan in order to cook the lunch Ms Specter had a grear surprise, she founf her watch in the fish when she was cutting it open. "I'm very lucky," she said, with tears of joy rolling down her face.

Is it ok? hi everybody, i have a question, i have to order the following expressions, which of them mean 1- DIE 2- A DEAD PERSON or 3- DEAD ? and the expressions are: - pass on (die) - the late Sheelahg Graham (a dead person) - pass away (dead) - kick the bucket (die) - give up the ghost (die) - at peace (dead) - the deceased (dead) Am I right?

Is it ok? hi everybody, i have a question, i have to order the following expressions, which of them mean 1- DIE 2- A DEAD PERSON or 3- DEAD ? and the expressions are: - pass on (die) - the late Sheelahg Graham (a dead person) - pass away (dead) - kick the bucket (die) - give up the ghost (die) - at peace (dead) - the deceased (dead) Am I right?

Resume of a story, i need some corrections, would you help me? This story is about Baptista, a young woman who was a teacher but she didn't like teaching. She had agreed to marry to the oldest familiy's friend, Mr Heddegan and when she was heading back to his house she met a friend. He was Charles, a pretender. Charles asked her to marry her and Baptista acepted. The same day of the wedding Charles drawned in the sea so the woman almost inmediatly married to Mr Heddegan. Some time after the witness of her first marriage discovered her secret, she couldn't put up with the witness' bribes and told her husband the truth. Mr Heddegan told her a secret too, he had four daughters. At first Baptista didn't like the girls. Time passed and she grow to love them.