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Time to Eat Every day we need food and beverage to fulfil our stomach to run our life. We need eat and drink to make our body health. We always create some kinds of food everyday in the kitchen. As the example, the writer will give some steps to make noodles. Preparing phase-The first step that we must prepare is the tools such as the fan, plate, fork, spoon, and scissors. Then you must also prepare the noodles and the another ingredients such as cabbage, egg, noodles, onion, and even the chili. Cooking phase-And the next step that you must follow is the cooking step, you must boil the water around 400cc, boil the water around 3 minutes in the fan. After that put the noodles in that fan which the boiled water. Mixing until the noodles blossoming. While we boil the noodles, prepare the plate and sour some condiments in the plate. After we boil the noodles around 3 minutes, strain off the water from the fan, and then mix the noodles with the condiments in the plate and mix them all. Finally, the noodles are ready to be served. Eating phase-After we pass the preparing phase and cooking phase we have to enjoy our eating phase. We have time to enjoy what we have cooked before. As we see the three steps to enjoy eating noodles, we know if we want to eat noodles we must pass all those three steps. It always happens in our real life. If we want to get succeed, we must pass the all things before getting our succeed. Such us we must pass the preparing phase-they are including the studying phases, knowing our life purposes, and the strategy to get the succeed. The cooking phase is the phase to drill our capability, our responsibility and even our knowledge by doing the job or working action. If you want to be a businessmen you must pass the phases of meeting with your clients, and etc. And the last, after we pass the two previous phases-we go to the eating phase, we have to meet to our goals that is always called as the succeed. So, enjoying your phase is the realistic things to do before you are really getting your succeed. Enjoying every moments that the God gives is “nerimo” action.