Describing datas for IELTS exam (Task 1) Thank you for any comment and suggestion of word/expression. (Please if you have took IELTS exam or you have experience in this test, let me know your strategies or suggestions) Thank you in advance :) The graph illustrate the age groups who were more likely to buy tickets for different types of enternteinment during some months of 2006 in three nations and what kind of device they used for getting the tickets. Overall, Australia was the country which have more consumers of tickets and desktop computer was the most common device used for buying them. First, it is clear that Australia was the main country which bought more tickets for enterntainment in both age groups. In the 25-44 years group there was around 55% of people making up opposed to Malasy which had only around 33% of consumers in this category. Then, in the group of 65 years and more, the majority of consumers of this comparasion was found in Australia with 40%. On the other hand, Malasya was again the country with the lowest percentage of clients with around 35% only. In the case of UK, they had a very similar amount of people buying tickets as Australia: in the first category (25-44) 50% and 40% in the group of elderly people. Finally, it is evident that Desktop Computer was the greater device to acquired tickets in the three nations. The main country which opted to use it was Malasya (62%) opposed to Australia (55%). The second more popular advice used was laptop and the latest was mobile phones.

Science and Art in our society. on the next paragraphs, I discuss other's people opinions (This is a practice for IELTS exam) So, please let me know if you understand the ideas I expressed and if you have any suggestion, please share it wih me. Thank you in advance :D 1. They maintain that modern-economies cannot advance without a strong scientific base. A case in point is Mexico which have a lack of scientific researches. Consequently this has an important impact on the economy of my country and it is still an undevelop country. 2. It is argued by some people that Science has an effect on everything we do from eating to travelling. For instance, in the case of food, people can consume all types of products during all seasons of the year and this was initiated by the discoveries of Biology. Futhermore, the invention of the plane was possible with the principles of Physics. Thus, with this remarkable creation, we can travel faster and safer. 3. Some people feel that certain works of art that are produced are offensive and should be banned. Take as an example the citizens of my country who condemned the decision of allowing to mexicans artists to draw on some walls of the subway station because they considered urban art as inappropiate for the image of the city. 4. Many people think that scientists should have some involvement with artists and vici versa. Bringing these groups together would be better for society as a whole. A good example of this is when complex information from Science can be explained easier with a painting, music or statue. Thus, the understanding of ppeople of difficult scientific concepts would be improved. 5. A commonly held belief is that spending time alone in laboratories without much human contact is not very interesting. Take as an example the vast amount of movies which has spread this image. As a result, science is considered as boring career for a considerebly amount of people. 6. Some people feel that many scientific experiments are dangerous to society. There are many examples where serious mistakes have been made. A case in point is the troubling experiements with nuclear energy carried out in Chernobil which had not only negative effects on the environment but also on the health of thousand of people. As a result, the current society is more involved in avoiding that these kind of catastrophes take place again.

The young generation, their role in current social problems. [This is my latest exercise of writing for IELTS. I have noticed I learn a lot with comments from this community, (thank you so much :D) so I will continue sharing my progress here. please let me know your opinion, I am pretty open to receive your suggestions about my coherence, vocabulary choices and my grammar. Thank you again!] There are those who believe younger generations have a vast amount of knowledge about some social drawbacks opposed to old people. In my view, I believe young people have more information about these issues and consequently more actions are taken to solve them. Firstly, environmental issues are well known in our society but in particular by young people. Take as an example air pollution caused by old cars. Nowadays, the fashionable trend is to opt to buy electric vehicles in most of the major cities in the world. As a result, people agree with taking more eco-friendly choices and these actions have a positive impact on environment. Another important problem is poverty which is caused by a growing population effect experienced in a considerably amount of countries. This situation cause a lack of jobs because they are not enough for people. Moreover, migration is a consequence of hardship lived daily by thousands of people in poor conditions. However, young society are more enthusiastic with being part of the solution for these difficult situations . As an example of this, donating money and bassic items for living are collected by freshman students each year in my university. These events are applied because this young generation are aware about this problem but also effective solutions are done by them. Finally, the general opinion about animals rights has changed for the current society. Because situations as animals farming, circurs and films with participation of animals are exceedingly well controlled. For instance, in my country campaingns against zoos and circus leadered -the overwhelming majority- by young participants had an important role in the condemnation of circus in my city. Thus, it is more easy to avoid violence in animals if people take action and have a fair mind. To conclude, not only the perception of young people about environmental issues, poverty and violence against animals is more fair than their ancestors but this group of people are more involved in solving these issues as well.

IELTS TASK 1 MAP EXERCISE The exercise of this week. Feel free to comment suggestions and corrections because I learn a lot of them. Thank you in advance. :D The pictures illustrate the evolution ocurred at the sea side resort of Templeton. From 1990 to 2005. In 1990. the place was a greener zone with a vast amount of trees but during the next fifteen years , the zone experimented dramatic changes. The most noticeable is that all of the trees east of the river were cut down with some houses which were south of the school and replaced by a factory. Moreover, a supermarket was constructed south of the lake and the detached houses founded in 1990 made a way for three enormous buildings of apartments in 2005. Futher developments were the redevelopment of the railway line, which were longer from the railway station to west of it. Also, there is the presense of another transportation option for citizens: a ferry which is a great way to move to other areas effectively. Overall, both illustrations show the transformation of this place into to a major city.

The interesting history of how Europe changed Good day everyone! I watched a video about an interesting group of people called "Normans" and their connection to European history. Please, correct my mistakes if it is necessary. Thank you in advance :D Europe was made by the Normans, who were a group of migrants from Scandinavians countries. First, they arrived at France and adopted not only the language but the religion and other traditions as well. After two hundreds years later, they traveled directly to England and conquered this land as well. The same result happened in Ireland, Scotland and Wales. Their amazing success occured because Normans adopted well to the societies that were conquered by them. Due to these events, English language and European history are as we know them nowadays.

Sports are a neccessity in schools or not? (IELTS ESSAY practice task 2 ) Hello everybody! this is my latest essay task 2 for my IELTS preparation in writing Please let me know your opinion about the quality and coherence of my writing (to be honest, it is my weakness area haha) Thank you in advance :) There are those who think that all the kind of sports should not be included in the education system. Nevertheless, I fully disagree with this position because the are positive effects on children who pracice any kind of recreational activity. Some people express that physical activities are not suitable in schools. However, academic learning is highly conected to them. All sports have a positive result on the velocity of learning because the human brain works effectively well when our body is exercised (based on the latest researches carried by neuroscientifics around the world). Take for example the academies of my country. Mexican institutions have sports as a compulsory class. Students choose it and consequently, they get excellent grades because their brain is stimulated though exercise. Also, there are great benefits related to social and mental health. Firstly, it is widely known that children have more opportunities to develop social skills as emphaty when they practice a sport. For instance, in my country, mexican schools have 20 minutes per day for playing football. This strategy was efficient in decreasing fights among students because they are in a relax environment where making friends is more likely to happen. This would lead to have a healthier mental health on children, which is a mandatory for being a successful person. In conclusion, the importance of sports in schools is very relevant because its great results in learning, social skills and mental health. undoubtedly they must not be eliminated from academias.

If you are a male, it is more likely that you have a degree (IELTS task 1) This is my writing practice for IELTS task 1. Please give me your opinion about the coherence and cohesion of this task. Also, if you had done the test, let me know it. Maybe you could give me any advice. This graph illustrates the best studies certificates gotten by women and men in a British city in 2001/2002. Overall, males had better level of studies than women. First, it was clear males spent considerably more time studying or getting certifications compared with females. The overwhelming population of males (38%) acquired a GCEA-A level and the minority of men was able to get higher education qualification certificate at least. Another relevant point is that this group had more people with a degree o equivalent grade than the group of women with 13 per cent and 11 per cent respectively. On the other hand, the majority of women had a GSCEA level only with close to one third. Exactly a quarter of this group had not any academic preparation compared with males, this group was not academically well prepared. The other comparisions had the same pattern. Except with the higher education level, where slightly more women than men had this certificate (8% and 7%). Thank you guys :)

Opinions about different topics There are those who think foreign language learning should be compulsory, because it is efficient in developing creativity and self-discipline on humans. For instance, in some mexican schools it is a mandatory to learn at least English. In this class, Mexicans really enjoy learning with fun activities and develop a learning routine. Some people believe that students need to have good study skills on entering university because and effecive learning requires a lot of self-studying. Take for example my experience as an undergraduate student. I needed to develop self-discipline during my studies. it could be easier if I had acquiered those skills before being in uni. There are those who believe university lectures need some teacher training since it is a relevant skill they already should have. For example, in Findland, professors have an intense previous course in teaching skills. This strategy had lead them to have the best lectures of the world! Some people feel boys and girls ought to be educated in separate schools, because they are psychologically and physically different. For example, in some Spanish schools, females and males are educated based on their genre.

A new leader in Thailand Thailand will have a new leader in a pair of days. This new king is not as popular as his father because most of the time he is abroad. Nevertheless, the future king is well trained with military skills. There will be an outstanding event for celebrating the new king which will include some rituals. Some of which are to rever the new leader. This celebration will not shielded of scrutiny because citizens will see entirely the ritual. However, there is a climate of uncertainty for the monarch, a general election was held on 24 March. As the time goes on, we would see the political Thailand future. Thank you for your corrections, guys! :D