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IELTS WRITING TASK 2
"In recent years there has been a decline in the number of different species of animal and plant.
What are the causes and effects of this problem?
What measures can be taken to reduce this problem?"
Recent years has seen a decrease in the quantity of different species of animal and plant all over the world. This mainly originates from directly devastating activities of human beings, which lead to dire consequences. This essay will suggest the causes and effect as well as solutions to this problem.
Deliberately destructive actions of man may be considered as the first to destroy the natural balance in the world. In one instance, large amount of forest is cut down everday, resulting in numerous subsequent matters. Numerous natural catastrophes like flood or landslide follow; the world lacks oxygen supply and the living environment of animal and plant is harmed. Another notable example is that, the uncontrollable hunting of people are putting rare animals at risk thus degrading the biodiversity of our earth.
Therefore, we must prevent this concern for our interest. First of all, the government should uphold strict penalties to anyone who decimate animals and plants. To this end, the government should introduce law levied against those selling and buying rare species illegally, for example. Besides it is also necessary to raise human's knowledge about how the ecology means to them. This can be achieved by educating children from early age or using the media to make this knowledge common to everyone.Such measures could act as tremendous steps towards solving this problem.
In a nutshell, species of animal and plant has declined recently due to human beings. This can be countered by bringing in strict law environmentally related and people's knowledge. It is hoped that these strategies are increasingly put into practice in the foreseeable future.
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ielts writing task 1: pie chart
Movie preferences
The pie charts represent movie choices over three age groups in the country of Evonia. Generally, younger people prefer action movies and animations, whereas older ones prefer documentaries and dramas.
The most popular genre in the two young age groups is animations, at 28% for those from 20-35 years old and 25% for those from 36-50 years old. This proportion decreases slightly to 24% for those in the youngest age group with a small decline to 20% in the middle-aged group. Documentaries and dramas are less popular with young audiences, at 11%, 15% respectively in the youngest age group and at 16%, 20% respectively in the middle-aged group. In contrast, these genres are most popular with people from51- 65 years old, constituting a significant percentage of movie selection, at 63%. Only 7% of this age group prefers action film and 10% prefer animations. It is also interesting to note that romances have a steady number of audiences over three age categories within the range of 19% and 22%.
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Escape to the country_should we?
The modern and noisy life in large industrial cities have prompted more and more people to escape to the countryside. The tendency sounds great, yet, several objections might also be raised. Based on my own experiences and observations, I think that, on the balance, retired people and the elderly might greatly benefit from leaving cities for the country. Whereas, children and working-aged people are recommended to live in cities for better education and career.
There are many advantages living in large cities. The first point i want to say is the perfect community facilities such as museum, opera house, park, amusement attraction, to name but a few. Public transportation, for instance, is always reasonable and affordable, with fair price. Furthermore, most companies are located in city, so there are many job opportunities enabling people to be employed. Even if ones desire to run their own business, cities could provide them sterling conditions. Because the majority of cooperation as well as wealthy people are available in cities, the market for business is much more potential. In addition, cities have services to meet the public's demands, varying from health-care to finance. Excellent education provided in cities is also a great blessing.
On the other hand, many people would disagree with the idea of living in cities. Considering the noisy life and fast pace of cities, they claim that country is relatively more optimum. The country environment is the best, quiet, peaceful, green.v.v. Other than that, there is less crime here and people are much friendlier, more hospitable.
However, could country life be a good place for young people to pursue their aims?, or could it provide better education than cities? The answers to these questions are explicitly "no". Country do not noticeably have many merits which cities have.
In conclusion, even though escaping to the country is ideal, it is dependent on a person's situation to consider whether the trend really works for them. I feel that country, for its qualities, would be the best place for the elderly, young people, on the contrary, are more suitable to experience city life.
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learning IELTS writing
Is anyone learning for the IELTS exam like me?
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please help me make this sentence more fomal in a more idiomatic style.
However, if developing countries are not capable of tackling with this problem, it is reasonable for the west to aid them because keeping our world undamaged is the desire of every single individual no matter where he is.
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このコンテンツはitalki Community のガイドラインに違反しています。2014年2月24日
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If I take lessons of the teachers on italki, do I have to pay money.
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