Essay fro CAE The task of an essay is to write which 2 facilities out of 3 (sport centre,hystory museum,car park) are needed most in my area.i should give reasons in support of my answer. i would be grateful if u correct my mistakes,punctuation and the structure of an essay itself.may be u can also give me some more additional information which can be helpful.thank u in advance! To begin with, i would like to mention that my town has changed for better during last years. Lots of playgrounds for children were made,the area became more greenery.In addition,we have more enertaining places for spending days-off.However, building a car park and a sport centre will be a good improvement of facilities in my hometown. On the one hand,sport is one of the essential parts of a person's life. It helps us to not only gain good health but gives our lives interest, enthusiasm and excitement. A sport centre would make many youngsters happy in my neighbourhood.It will attrack not only teenagers,but also elderly people who could benefit from a sport centre by joining clubs and activities appropriate for their age. On the other hand,a car park is needed by people doing shopping in the area,especially at the market place and shopping centres.And as there is few parking space in my town,it causes inconvenience to local people,especially at weekends,when all nearby streets are crammed with cars.Moreover,there is a great number of people who drive to work using cars.To my mind,they will feel more at ease knowing that their cars will not be stolen directly from the street. In conclusion,noticing all advantages of these two facilities,building a car park and a sport centre should be number one priority of local authorities.