First try in IELTS writing test. Please tell me, is it readable? The topic that is discussed here is about why the land becomes less productive and gives less harvest. As we can see at the pie chart, there are three general reasons for that. The process that looks like to be the biggest problem is over-grazing which takes 35% of all the pie chart. Deforestation is on the second place with its 30%. And over-cultivation causes just a little bit less problems in a worldwide range with its 28% in comparison with deforestation. The table below shows some interesting facts: First, Europe now have the worst situation with its lands, as they have degraded at totally 23%. Second, Oceania doesn't have any problems with over-cultivation, but over-grazing is the issue that have to be attended closely. Third, it seems that North America is succeed in taking care of its land, as it have the smallest percent of land degradation. So maybe Europe should learn from North America in this particular cases?