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The Thing in the Corner of Your Eyes I wrote this fan fiction about Doctor Who yesterday to train my writing, but when I finished I had no idea how much mistakes I had made haha I already thank for the correction (and, please, don't judge the story) :) Who was the prisoner Zero and what was it in the corner of the eyes? Although being important questions, it all became insignificant when the TARDIS' self destruction sound began. Running through that dark night to save his oldest companion, the Doctor promises to the little Amelia Pond back for her. "5 minutes." He said. "Give me 5 minutes and I'll come back" Inside TARDIS, everything was on fire; the engines had turned on while as the dematerialization circuit as the propellants had been turned off. A 5 Earth minutes hop could spare the time travel system of any damage, but for this he needed first to stabilize his ship. After to turn on the circuit and the propellant, he typed the coordinates on the control centre and the TARDIS had entered the vortex. Suddenly, it stopped. As he looked through the camera, the Doctor realized that his abrupt stop had been at the vortex itself. Maybe the fire had injured the TARDIS mobility across the temporal waves. The sprinklers had been compromised during his regeneration so the Doctor had to fix them Using his sonic screwdriver, the Doctor forced an exit to the water. A smoke filled the air. Back to the ship control, he forced a move between the vortices Relieved, the Doctor thought about the Scottish girl, the crack and the thing he couldn't to notice. "What am I not seeing?" He thought. The warder in the crack had said that the prisoner Zero has escaped. And it's look like he has escaped through the Amelia's bedroom "What is in the corner of my eyes and I can't see?" Since the Doctor was at Amelia's, he could sense that something was wrong, that there was something there he ignored. It was like when he used... "Of Course!" He said "Perception filters! There's something at that house with a strong perception filter hiding... Hiding what? What's could the prisoner hide that would be so important? What he would need?" TARDIS landed and the Doctor adjusted the TARDIS into the rebuilding program. "Rebuilding. He needs to repair himself! Oh, he would need a room to it. This! This is what I couldn't see, a room! Oh, Amelia, I need to take you out of that house". Getting out TARDIS, the Doctor ran toward the house on a bright day. He was late, he noticed, but what he didn't know was that he was 12 years late
2016年9月16日
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The Dogs Those days I was backing home when I was chased by a pack of dogs. It all happened after I get out of a bus, with market bags on my hands, and passed in front of a dog. This, after saw me, started to bark. Few seconds later, three others appeared from nowhere. When I saw they staring at me I found myself in a very difficult dilemma: should I run or turn my back and walking slowly? I choose the first one - and it was a terrible idea. Dogs are incredibly fast and, different from me, don't get tired after a time running. In brief, they cornered me and I had to give them a little bit of my food.
2016年7月11日
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