correct for me , plz correct for me , plz studying hard at university help us have a good job in the future and is promoted in work. a boss need to be friendly and kind. He knows how to control his aggressive feelings so that his staffs can feel comfortable and work at full capacity authorities should raise/increase awareness of environmental protection for their local citizens agricultural and industrial practices produce sewage and wastewater that causes pollution of many lakes and rivers. In city there are many entertainments/ amusements such as going to cinema , zoo, shopping malls and and amusement parks . Even we can eat out at restaurant with your friends . a big number of high buildings take place in city . it looks colorful and bright. I can entertain myself with laptop

How do you want a friend to be ? Everyone alway has at least one best friend. She/He stands by side you to have fun with and share secrets of each other. I think to keep a friendship forever, he/she need to have the following qualifies. Firstly , he/she has a sense of kindness. No matter that their ability is better than you;howerver, they will help you resolve problems instead of being confident that they are the best. They are not jealous if you get mark that is higher than you. The second qualify that the best friend has is a sense of humor. they are not shy to express their emotion. When you are unhappy , they wil tell funny stories or even make a urly face in oder to help you forget your bad feeling. limited idea :(

help me correct it , please I am sorry for not writing to you earlier but I am studying hard for an English exam. I'm writing to thank you because you let me stay with you and your family in last christmas it was such a wonderful day that it's hard for me now to go back routine. I know that a week is not enough time to discover all London The sightseeing tour was fantastic and I really love "Mamma Mia", the musical I remember that we spent long hours having a cup of tea with your grandmother while she told us old stories I'm sure My English is better now to thanks her. For the last 2 months I have made a lot of progress I think i'm able to move to the new house in next week I'm really looking forward to showing it for you That's all now . Write soon to tell me all your news. Give my love to your family. Best wishes,

Please , correct it for me Parents always hope that their children can study at university to have a bright future. Some people believe that doors of universities open great oppotunities to look for an ideal occupation, However, others think that real skill and experiences are more necessary. Personally , i agree with the first idea, Firstly , attending university gives you a sense of independence. At high school , you live with your parent and they do everything for you such as cooking , cleaning the house and preparing essential things for you. When you studying at university, you must learn how to cook , manage your money and comunicate with everyone. It helps you be independent in work environment. Secondly, You have basic knowledge to practise in real life. You are not confused when facing some real situations. For example, a doctor need to learn about parts of a body and how they operate. Noone cannot do it without theories. Then they go to hospital to learn experiences from long-working doctors to firm their knowledge, Finally, Noone belive that you are excellent. your degree proves how well you have tried.

beside the advantages of the Internet Thank for the development of technology. Nowadays, everyone has used the Internet to shorten the distance among people and access news in the world quickly, However, everything always has its positive and negative sides. We will discuss below. Firstly, spending a lot of time on the Internet is harmful to our health. Some people are addicted by social webs such as facebook , skype and zalo. Contacting much with the screen of computer and cellphone has a negative impact on our eyes. It causes weak eyesight. Sitting much makes us fatter ,even get serious diseases such as obese , stroke and heart attack. Secondly, they lose communicating skills. They get confused and shy when meeting people. Finally, We are easily tricked because of trusting sellers in the internet. For example , some online shops show a lot of exported goods with high expense . After transfering money to them and receive what they bought , customers know that they were defrauded.

Art is an essential subject for children at school or a waste of time? I have to write at least 250 words but i had no idea for it ,,, :( Nowadays, children have chance to learn more and study many things soon. Some people believe that it is neccessary for children to study art.However, others claim that this subject takes a lot of time and is not useful. Totally, I agree with the first statement. The first reason why studying Art is a good way is that they can improve their imagining. They creat new ideas and show what they want to do. They can share their results to each other and tell what thay are thinking of. Morever, It makes them more active and intelligent. They can learn real lessons from other people at school through this subject and meet many people. Secondly, Studying art helps them be close to their family. Their parents can know their emotion and what they need. They can draw and have a good time with their parents. It will creat a firm relationship among members in a family. In short, these opinions are reasons why I believe that children should study art at school. Although they need time to learn other subjects, they still can spend a little time studying art as well as discovering their creation.

hello everyone my name is Dung . im from vietnam. i want to have more friends and improve my English ,,,