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Question-Many students decide to further their study abroad what are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently, a number of students are going to other countries for studying their major and experiment. However, there is a dispute whether pupils should go to overseas or not. there are benefits as well as disadvantages. first, the benefit is experience and broaden student knowledge. On the other hand, the disadvantage is homesick and difference culture.
First of all, international students can obtain a lot of benefits in other countries through studying their major. This is because, student major in their country is better than other countries, it is clear that there have more information and atmosphere. For example, when I was in university, my major is culinary so I went to French, there were a lot of information about cuisine and history, I had not enough time, but I learned considerable. Although it is short time, it accounted significantly in my life. Likewise, the abroad studying is affected to students in their major.
On the other hand, the oversea damage to students in their mind. This is because, there are a lot of different culture in the world. the student should adapt there culture. In addition, food is also different. According to Korean newspapers research, the considerable international students came back to their country. This is because, they could not adapt there culture and food. The homesick came in second place on research. For the this reasons, It is clear that the oversea studying has plenty of difficult problems.
To sum up, the oversea studying exist in benefits and drawbacks. I agree that if the student major in their country is better than other country, the student can study in other country. Mentioned above, this essay will justify my opinion.
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subject- In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Recently, there is a dispute whether the eating habit have been changing comparing with the old generation. It is clear that some people prefer the fastfood more than old generation. However, I totally agree with this view. This essay will justify my opinion.
First, there is a lot of fastfood restaurants in many countries. People can eat and buy these foods easily. Some people say
that the fastfood helps people who do not have enough time to eat their meal. In addition, the fastfood is very comfortable eating and people can save the time.
On the other hand, some people say that the fastfood have not enough nutrition, so it does not help to people. Because, this taste is the most extreme and there is a lot of salt and oil. Furthermore, people tend to find more extreme taste, so the fastfood is changed more and more extreme taste by the CEO.
It situation is really dangerous for people to save their health. The proportion of condiments keep increasing consistently.
According to newspapers in Korea, the teenager obesity was dramatically increased in modern society. Because, most teenager prefer the fastfood more than slow food. Compare to old generation and now, old generation children cannot eat the fastfood. they ate always slow food, fruits and vegetable, so they balance of eating habit were good condition.
In conclusion, the situation is alarming for not only children but also adults. People will change this phenomenon. I agree that children eat the fastfood once a week, but the fastfood drawback should not be ignored.
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subject- In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Recently, there is a dispute whether the eating habit have been changing comparing with the old generation. It is clear that some people prefer the fastfood more than old generation. However, I totally agree with this view. This essay will justify my opinion.
First, there is a lot of fastfood restaurants in many countries. People can eat and buy these foods easily. Some people say
that the fastfood helps people who do not have enough time to eat their meal. In addition, the fastfood is very comfortable eating and people can save the time.
On the other hand, some people say that the fastfood have not enough nutrition, so it does not help to people. Because, this taste is the most extreme and there is a lot of salt and oil. Furthermore, people tend to find more extreme taste, so the fastfood is changed more and more extreme taste by the CEO.
It situation is really dangerous for people to save their health. The proportion of condiments keep increasing consistently.
According to newspapers in Korea, the teenager obesity was dramatically increased in modern society. Because, most teenager prefer the fastfood more than slow food. Compare to old generation and now, old generation children cannot eat the fastfood. they ate always slow food, fruits and vegetable, so they balance of eating habit were good condition.
In conclusion, the situation is alarming for not only children but also adults. People will change this phenomenon. I agree that children eat the fastfood once a week, but the fastfood drawback should not be ignored.
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recently, there is a dispute whether students depend using a computer in classroom. they tend to look down on thier reading and writing skills. some people believe that writing and reading skills is more important for young students , so i disagree students are using a computer in classroom. this essay will justify my opinion.
First, we can see that students are using a computer everywhere. they are doing homework and studying something. By the use of computer, they can take a step forward thier knowledge easily. In addition, teacher also prefer using a computer. because it can teach ease to students in education.
on the other hand, it is clear that students prefer a computer than typed-up by thier hands, so it is serious problem. they ignored thier spelling, it damage the education and thier writing and reading skills. in addition, they focus on conciseness where send text. in fact, students are making a new word in modern society.
according to newspaper, new 300 word are made by students per month, some people can not understand these words.
Teacher also complain these situation. because there is the same situation in thier exam. furthermore , the book stores sales has decreased the last decade. because, students do not have to read a books, they get certain information through thier computer although affected thier reading and writing skills.
in conclusion, most student are using computer although damaged thier writing and reading skills. i totally disagree with the opinion.
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