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"You are what you eat" Could you help me to correct this writting? :) I am totally agree with the sentence “you are what you eat” because I have read a little about it, and it seems we are like a glass of water, all substances that you take changes your composition, this is what happens to our cells. Then I will write the different ways I understand that phrase. I understand “you are what you eat” in three different means. The first one is about unnatural medicaments. There are many researches which support that, if we took only healthy food, most diseases would disappear and we needn’t artificial pills, because foods is our best medicine. The second one is about fast food. Our forefathers were eating only healthy food for miles of years, but later, this changed. Most of actual society takes a lot of fast food, which contains a lot of artificial dangerous components for our body, because it contains a lot of saturated fats, which produces heart diseases in a high percent of people who abuse of it. Moreover, most of meat in fast food industries become from animals fed with a lot of hormones in order to get fat fast. The third and last one is about direct changes in our body after take different types of food. Fruits and vegetables makes you feel slight and fresh after lunch, and you notice a lot of energy after take them, however, when you take fried food you feel heavy and tired. Furthermore, food gets very modified when you fried it, losing a lot of properties which our body needs.
2015年10月12日
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Our planet, our home! Help me correct this writting please ^^ I think that caring our planet is one of the most important things we must do, and there are a lot of easy ways to do it. I started to learn this matters when a group of activist from Greenpeace gave us a talk in school when I was younger. There are a lot of people who do not mind caring the planet and they throw a lot of thrash to the nature, but they should know that they are living in The Earth too, and everybody must care their home. I have been investigating about it, and I have read that, despite of climate change is not happening only by our fault, we are hurting our environment a lot. Perhaps the first problem is the education system, because not everybody knows how they can help, neither the importance of it. Furthermore, lots of animal species are disappearing because of hunting, and that is destabilizing wildlife. Moreover, lots of lands are deforested every year in Amazon to plant grain in order to feed billions of animals in meat industry, which produces more CO2 than planes, cars or the rest of industries together, while many people are dying because of hunger. To conclude, if we want to save our planet, in one hand we have to help from home by recycling trash or reducing meat consummation an in the other hand we can help outside home in many different activities in nature. There are more and more people taking awareness of these questions, and we will see a change soon, although perhaps we have to wait many years to notice it.
2015年10月8日
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