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Ielts writing exercise
Topic:High school students should participle in unpaid community work as a compulsory part of their high school programme. Do you agree?
Recently, more and more universities intend to include a one year work placement as a optional programme so as to strengthen their working ability and experiences. Furthermore, some parents recommend that senior secondary school student should also add these unpaid community work as a compulsory of their high school programme.
Without doubt, students attending community work can provide an opportunity for them to learn a lot that school cannot teach. As during a work life, they need to communicate with different kinds of people that they have never faced before. These conversations with others can improve students social and communication skills. Also, attending work placement can improve their working experience so as to strengthen their self-confident. In the future, they can have a greater confidence to face those difficulties which they have to solve.
However, some people argue that the major responsibilities of a high students is to focus on their academy studies and develop their own personality. People believe that the sociality is too complex and teenagers who have not yet fully develop their personality should not be too early to in touch with these sociality. Moreover, setbacks that they have faced from the community works may bring negative influence toward their self-esteem. Students may then easily give up in front of difficulties since of the low self-esteem.
To conclude, I believe attending a community work is unsuitable for high school student as a must. Schools should depend on student’s ability so as to make a discussion whether the student is capable to achieve the goals and targets of their job.
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An email writing (Exercise)
Dear Mr Rages,
I am writing to talk about the complaint that we have recently received from the student.
After checking the records, we found out that there were plenty of complaints from people who had food poisoning. Take Gracie Ma, as an example. She visited the Coffee Shop on Tuesday 3rd January and ordered a sandwich. An hour later, she started suffering from stomach pains. The doctor told her that it was she had a food poisoning from the food in the campus Coffee Shop.
Due to the complaint, we have taken a follow-up action on Monday 9th March and unfortunately there were many unacceptable problems. First, many ingredients such as meat and vegetables were kept for long period of time out of the fridge. They were no longer fresh and gone bad. Moreover, we found there were insects, for example, cockroaches, in the kitchen. Furthermore, the stuffs did not wear any plastic gloves.
We hope that (Question:I don't know how to end up my writing in a polite way. I need to warn him if he doesn't make improvement, the campus wont renew the contract. So how should I finish my writing? need helpTT)
Yours truly,
Pat Lee
Assistant
Campus services Department
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A letter to my English teacher
Dear Miss Cheung,
I am very lucky that we have met you at the last year of secondary school. It is our pleasure to have a such kindful and heartful English teacher. Though honestly I feel a bit sad that you just teached us a few months, we still learn a lot from you. Thank you for being our English teacher this year! It is really helpful.
Yours truly,
Wendy
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