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This is a writing practice. I've been asked to do an essay about a topic. I'd apreciate if someone help me to correct it.
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Should people who are studying or working hard take regular exercise?
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The topic of the advantages of doing sport every day is known by everybody. Because of some people's lifestyle, they don't use to do exercise regulary, but I think that they should try it in order to have a better life quality.
Most of human beings has problemas in their life because they work and study too hard. Workers usually have a very stressful life because they want to be very good professional in their jobs and students always try to do their best, even dedicating many hours at night.
At the same time, they could have troubles with thinking clearly and having a good sleep. All these issues could be solve if the practiced some sport every day.
On the other side, there are some drawbacks of taking more exercise. The first of them is that the most of the sports are not free and people have to spend money for that. The other one is not having enough time to do any of these activities.
To sum up, I consider that everyone would have to practice some sport, because it will improve their lifestyle. While is true that not all of the sports are free and they take time for people, there are other ones that are free, such as running, and they only take no more than forty minutes. I'm sure that it will be worth and it will become them happier.
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The new café
“Your college is going to create a new student café. You have been asked to write a report for the principal, explaining why students don’t use the existing facilities and making recommendations for the new café.
Write your report”
Introduction.
The aim of this report is to outline what can be improved in the new café of the university, in order to be successful and to explain why the old one is not used by the students these last years.
Opening hours.
The old café closes too early. If the opening hours are extended and the students are able to enjoy their free time after classes, the attendance of the new café will increase for sure.
More variety.
Despite the actual food is very tasty, in this moment students don’t have too much choices. It would be a great idea to increase the product offer, perhaps adding options for vegetarian people and free-gluten food, as well as healthier one.
New furniture.
A point that could be reconsidered is changing the hard chairs for another ones a little more comfortable. Furthermore, adding a section with soft sofas would attract students that want to chill.
Conclusion
The university truly needs an space for relaxing and chilling, so if it is possible to create a café that closes later, offers a tasty and healthy variety of meal and gets more comfortable, I’m sure that it will be the new meeting point of the college.
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Essay about the wildflife
This is a writing practice. I've been ask to do an essay about a topic. I'd apreciate if someone help me to correct it.
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TOPIC: Not enough is being done to protect endangered animals. Do you agree?
In order to answer this question, I need to consider some facts, like how many animals are under threat and why we should protect them.
First of all, it is important to indicate the huge variety of animal species that are under threat, like many breeds of tigers, monkeys, elephants or snakes. The main reason why the wildlife is being threatened, is because the look atractive, in one way or another, for the people, who want to get their skin, eat them or use any other part of their body to make clothes or as a decoration object.
In this way, every living being is unique and humans must avoid their extinction. People has the chance to killing endangered animals. But hunting is not the only guilty, a many animals are dying because their enviroment is being destroyed, such as polar beard, who their home is getting worse because of global warming.
To sum up, I consider that we need to stop this situation. For this reason, more international laws limiting hunting and the destruction of the enviroment, as well as to stop the global warming, must be approved, in my opinion.
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