Can you correct my mistakes, please? We might have a school trip to your country next year. What do you think is the best time of year to visit? What are the most interesting things for teenagers to do in your area? Hi Maria, I am writing this letter to reply your questions about travelling to my country next year. First of all, I think that my country is a beautiful and peaceful place, so it is good destination to come with your school friends. Besides, in Spain the weather is generally better than in another countries in Europe. As for this, I believe that the best time of year to visit it is in the spring because the days is sunny but it isn’t too hot like in summer. What’s more, you may do many activities in the spring. For example, if you visit Barcelona, you will enjoy of activities such as going to a amazing acuatic park called Aquapark or going to the beach to do watersports. Also, there are another activities in my country like visit museums, or places of public interest. Anyway, I would like to know if you visit my country to spend time with you here. Love, Brenda.

Can you correct my mistakes, please? Formal letter You and some friends had dinner in a restaurant a few nights ago. The service at the restaurant was terrible and the food was bad. You and two friends had severe stomach-aches the following day. The food was also overpriced. Write to the manager of the restaurant and explain these problems. Give any details that you think are relevant. Ask the manager to do something about the situation. Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain me about the bad service of your restaurant. Recently, I went with my friends to dinner in your restaurant and we left very angry with the service and the food. First of all, when we arrived at restaurant, we spent one hour to sat down us at the table. Then, we asked to eat our favourite food which is chicken and baked potatoes. However, my friends Patrick and Peter decided to eat pasta such as macaroni with tomato sauce. When we tasted the food, it was very cold. In spite of this, we ate it because we were very hungry but the taste was really bad. What’s more, the next day my friends Patrick and Peter had severe stomach-aches and they needed to go to the doctor who gave them a pill. All in all, we are very unhappy with your restaurant and we do not recommend it to nobody if you do not do something about this situation. Hoping hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Brenda

Can you correct my mistakes, please? Story Your English teacher wants you to write a story. Your story must begin with this sentence: “I was on the bus when I got a text message” I was on the bus when I got a text message. My brother had written me to tell me he was coming from Italy to visit me. It was a amazing news! Since one year ago, my brother is living in another country because he found a job very interesting where he earns more money than in Spain. When he wrote me to tell me it, I started to prepare a dinner to that night and I invited to whole my family to my house. Besides, my mother had cooked his favourite food which was chicken and potatoes baked. When he arrived to my house, he was very happy and grateful with us. He came with his girlfriend in order to we meet her, but also there was other surprise. My brother had come with his girl to tell us they are going to get married the next year in Venice. All in all, we are very happy to the news and we hope to help them with whole the preparations to that day so special.

Can you correct my mistakes, please? Informal letter You are going to a concert this evening with a group of friends and want to ask your English friend Peter to come too. Write a letter to leave for Peter. In your letter, you should: - ask Peter to join you at the concert this evening - explain where the concert will take place - tell Peter what sort of music will be performed Hi Peter, I am writing this letter to ask you if you want to come with us to a pop concert this evening. Last week, my school friends and I bought five tickets to enjoy of conciert of a well-known band of music called “The sun”. However, today my friend Patrick tell me that he isn’t going to go to concert of this evening because he is ill and his doctor recommend that he doesn’t go out until he feel good. Because of this, I would like to invite you to come with us because I know you really like to go with friends to concerts, also you love pop music, such as we are going to hear this evening. What’s more, the concert will be at a stadium near of my home, so you can to stay in my house to sleep, if you want. Anyway, I hope your answer as soon as you can. Love, Brenda.

Can you correct my mistakes, please? This is part of a letter you receive from a British friend: - I went to a great restaurant with my family last night. Which do you prefer: eating at home or in restaurants? Tell me about your favourite place to eat. Hi Maria, I am writing this letter to reply your questions about eating out or keeping at home. I really love to go out to different restaurants to taste variety of foods. I think that to eat at home is so boring! What’s more, I am used to eating out with my boyfriend every weekend. Last week, we went to eat near of our home to a place called “Trycicle” and we could taste a type of meat very delicious. Besides, this restaurant was very cheap, we paid only 30€! Although this restaurant is amazing, my favourite restaurant is called “The Time” and it is in the South of Gran Canaria. This restaurant is especially of pasta and when we went it one month ago, we liked whole type of pasta they cook here. Anyway, I would like you tell me your opinion about eating at home or in restaurants. I hope to hear from you soon! Love, Brenda.

Can you correct my mistakes please? Your English teacher has asked you to write a story. Your story must have the title: A Family Celebration Last saturday, whole my family celebrated the birthday of my brother. My parents did him a surprise party in a boat near of a beach in Mogan with his friends and family. We have been organizing this party for several weeks. We had rented a boat because my brother loves the sea. Also, we had bought a lot of food and drinks, and I decided to hire to his favourite musical band called Sunset. It was a amazing birthday party. When he arrived to boat, he was very happy and grateful with us. Besides, his friends gave him a wonderful present to enjoy it with his girlfriend. All in all, we enjoyed of a day in family although my parents spent a lot of money in this party. However, they had fun dancing with my family for whole afternoon.

Can you correct my mistakes, please? You receive a letter from a friend: I have joined the local roller skating club. Do you like sport? What sports do you do? Why do you like them? Do you like do them with your friends? Now write a letter answering your friend’s questions. Hi Maria, As promised, I am writing this letter to explain you because I really love to practise sports. When I was 6 years, my parents signed up in dance for two years with a friend of school called Sara. Then, I felt bored and I wanted to change the dance for another sport. Because of this, my parents signed up in tennis when I was 9 years. I started to play competitions every weekend and I felt that I loved to practise this sport. Also, I won an important competition when I was 15 years. Although I don’t practise tennis at present, I remember those years so happy. Nowadays, I would like practise any sport but I don’t have long free time. In spite of this, I ever practise paddle tennis with my friends because this sport is similar to the tennis. If you want to practise this sport you can come with us this weekend. It is very fun! Anyway, I hope to see you soon. Love, Brenda.

Can you correct my mistakes,please? In your English class you have been doing a project on young people and their health in your country. Your teacher has asked you to write your response to the following statement taken from a recent newspaper article: Research shows that young people today are not as healthy as they were twenty years ago. Why is this and can we do anything about it? Nowadays, young people are not so healthy as in the past due to they usually have an unhealthy diet and they don’t worry about their health. Recently, I read an article written by a well-known doctor and he explained the poor diet of the young people at present. First, I would like to explain my reasons regarding why I agree with that idea. Many teenagers often eat fast food in famous restaurants such as “McDonald’s or Burgen King” instead of they eat health food like fruits and vegetables. In spite of this, currently young people usually play any sport in their free time. However, twenty years ago teenagers didn’t practise sports as at present. All in all, if you have children you should teach them how to eat to be healthy.

Can you correct my mistakes, please? Your English teacher has asked you to write a story. Your story must begin with this sentence: I had never expected to see her again. I had never expected to see her again. It had been a long time since I saw her for the last time. She had been studying with me at the school and we were good friends. However, the last year of school she went to live with your father to other country. When I known that notice I felt myself very sad because I spent a lot of time with Maria at the school. She was my best friend and she helped me to pass a lot of subjects that for me it was very difficult to pass such as maths. In spite of this, we send ourselves letters for several years. She had told me that she going to continue living in Londres and that I had started to study in a well-known university called Cambridge University. Then, we stopped sending ourselves letters and I did't know nothing about my old friend of school. Recently, she came to visit me and I receive a great surprise. I don’t believe it yet!