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PLASTIC SURGERY Nowadays, plastic surgery is in fashion. Some time ago, plastic surgery was use by actors, singers and famous people but today, plastic surgery is accessible to all people. People like looking younger. Plastic surgeries are increasingly popular and the more plastic surgeries there are in a country, the cheaper they are. People need to feel self-confident to find a job or to know new people or to look better longer. For instance, it is the case of actors like Brad Pitt, Bruce Willis or Leonardo Di Caprio. They have therir faces surgeried by pastic surgeons. I believe they need to look better longer because of their jobs and because they become addicted to plastic surgery. People on television show us that looking good is very important and show us that there are no problems with plastic surgery. Personally, I'm a favour when a person has suffered an illness or an accident. For instance, when a person suffer an amputation of his arm, or when a person suffer breast-cancer. I think, plastic surgeries have risk, you might look even worse and you can even die. Today, there are clothes which may get better your appearance or there are make up that get better your eyes, your lips and your face. To sum up, I don't totally agree with plastic surgery but if you are determined to do it, you would look for a reliable doctor and a reliable hospital.

MOST PEOPLE FILL THEIR LEISURE TIME WITH MEANINGLESS ACITIVITIES. DO YOU AGREE? Nowadays, people need to do some activities to be happy and spend their free time. In this way, people suffer less stress and they are delighted at home and at the workplace. In most cases, I believe that people do lots of meaningless activities because these activities are in fashion and finally they end up leaving them. Firstly, the TV programs show people how fun is an activity. For instance, dance TV programs encourage people to participate in salsa dance class. But if these people don't usually listen to salsa music, they won't like dancing this kind of dance and they will end up leaving this activity. Secondly, in some cases, people use leisure activities to scape from difficult and stressful moments in their lives. In addition, people who never do sport, start doing risk sports like scuva diving, bungee jumping or climbing. In conclusion, leisure activities are useful when you like some particular activity and you feel comfortable with it, but they are not the solution when you have a problem and you want to fix that problem with a hobbie or an activity.

MUSIC Nowadays, people need to do some activities to be happy and to spend their free time. One of them is listening to music. Personally, I listen to music every day because it makes me happy, I am in a good mood and I feel full of energy. For example, I listen to music when I'm studying English, or doing housework or walking to school to pick up my children. Also, I have to say that my favourite singers are The Weeknd, Bruno Mars and Ariana Grande, and my favourite band is Coldplay. Why do I like these artists? Because they sing pop rock music and soul music, and I love these genres of music. On the other hand, I have to say that I hate listening to classical music because I think it is boring. The only classical song I like it is Moonlight ( Claro de Luna) by Debussy. And about commercial music, I can say that this kind of music is used at the disco and at the bars and not for this reason it is the best, but the opposite. This kind of music is easy to sing or to dance and it is usually about love, money or heartbreak. Personally, I like some commercial music and of course I hate reggaeton music. There are more young people at the disco than adult people and I think for this reason commercial music is the best for the music industry. Also, many teenagers use app in their mobiles to listen to commercial music.I think we have a certain style of music imposed on us nowadays, but also I think music is an art and is important in our lives. If it is commercial music or not, it is the least important.

The different forms of punishment In our society there are different forms of punishment for people who do not comply with the laws, people who steal things or people who attack or kill to someone. In the photo below I can see a person behind a prison fence. This person has his hands handcuffed. In the next photo I see a group of people in the street, these people are cleaning a garden or the street, it is as if they were doing a community service. And in the last photo, there is a room with an electric chair. Nowadays almost all crimes end with people in jail. It is said that in jail people have time to think about the crime they have committed and are expected to repent of what they have done. On the other hand, the punishment of the community service for those who have not committed crimes with weapons or violence, is beneficial for them. I think it is possible to reinsert these people, but if they are imprisoned with other people who have committed crimes or violent people, I think they would never achieve it because they would change their behavior negatively. And finally, I think the death penalty should be abolished. The death penalty means that we are not able to reinsert that person. And I do not think it serves as a method for some people do not commit a crime. Finally, I think it is better to reform criminals than punish them. We must give to that person a new opportunity to correct his/her mistakes and to feel useful his/her in our society and so that he/she does not make the same mistake again. If he/she is sent to jail, he/she will probably adopt bad habits, wait to serve his/her sentence and will not know how to interpret his/her regret.

BUYING THINS ONLINE Currently, online shopping is in fashion, however, there are many people who distrust this method of purchases. The new technologies are advancing and with them also our forms of purchases. The most purchased products online are plane tickets, books, clothes and electronic devices. Buying things online has some advantages. For example, we can buy anything at any time of the day and anywhere in the world. We do not have to queue to buy because we can do it from home or from work. We can also find better offers in online shopping than in physical stores. On the other hand, we also find some disadvantages buying things online. The buyer can not try or touch the product he is buying. Sometimes deliveries take a long. Also, one of the most important things is the payment method. We have to pay with our credit card and this makes us distrust because we do not want to be robbed. Personally, I would rather buy things like books, electronic devices or plane tickets on the Internet, however things like clothes and shoes, I would rather go to the physical store and try it on. To sum up, I can say that there are many benefits of buying things online and more and more people use this means of purchasing.

LEARNING A LANGUAGE Many of us have thought about learning a foreign language. Although the truth is that most of us do not have enough time or motivation to continue learning a language until reaching a good level. Some advantages of learning a foreign language are: * Train your brain. Learning a foreign language helps you stay fit and healthy. For example, diseases such as Alzehimer may appear later or even not appear. * Traveling becomes more fun. You can mix with the local people, learn about their culture, taste their food, understand their music and make new friends. * You can work or study abroad. You can find a great job and well paid. Also, if you study abroad you can improve your accent and pronunciation. * You can enjoy more the movies and foreign music. Some films take a while to be dubbed into Spanish, so you do not have to wait to see them. * You will become more independent, you will win confidence and you will be a self-confidence person.