There is one person I am really keen on Topic-There is one person I am really keen on There are many celebrities that leave an impression on me, but I am really keen on this person. He is a artist called Cai Guo-Qiang, who is one of the most prominent contemporary artist in China. He is good at making gunpowder painting. It was during my spare time that I watch a documentary about him for the first time. He came from a fishing village in China and he was raised by his grandmother, so his family was not wealthy in his childhood. However, his grandmother strived to earn a living in order to let him receive an education and supported him in whatever he wanted to do. Hence, he end up succeeding in becoming a renowned artist. To show an appreciation of his grandmother, he gave her a present about a piece of art entitled " The ladder of sky", which is a quite high ladder of fire climbing to the sky, connecting heaven and earth. He said that it's the most difficult project and he had tried it for 20 years. That brightened my eyes when I saw it. I found it breathtaking and touching. I really adore him. Whatever lots of setbacks he experiences, he never give up keeping going on his design. That's why I am a big fan of him.

Is this sentence correct? If it is wrong, how can I correct it? *A warm breeze blew through my face that made me cozy. Thank you all!!!

Is this sentence correct? A ray of sunshine shone through sunflowers, which were so gorgeous that I couldn't resist the impulse to look at them. Thank you all !!!

My favorite flower is a sunflower. There are many flowers I have seen, but there is one particular flower I am fond of. It is a sunflower, which is composed of numerous petals and a flower head. It looks like a smiling sun with yellow color. It was during a short journey with my family that I paid a visit to a farm. When we arrived there, a sea of sunflowers on the ground brightened my eyes and lifted my spirits. I was exhilarated, so I headed towards them and took a look. A ray of sunshine shone through sunflowers which were so gorgeous that I couldn't resist the impulse to look at them, so I decided to take some pictures.I called my family over and we stood on the turf amid sunflowers because I wanted to keep photographs as a memento of the family trip. After that, for me, sunflowers symbolize enthusiasm as well as a wonderful and unforgettable memory. Most interestingly, once I read the article about my horoscope, I just found out that my lucky flowers is a sunflower, so I think that brings me good luck.That's why I am an avid fan of sunflowers.

Is this sentence correct? I want to use this sentence before an oral exam, is this paragraph correct? Thank you all!!! It was during a short journey with my family that I paid a visit to a farm. It was a sunny day. When we arrived there, a sea of flowers made my eyes brighten up and lifted my spirits.

What does this sentence mean? Thank you! I cannot know the meaning of this sentence, could you help me to make it easier to understand? Thank you all!!! *We live in a world where we value being efficient- where we have a functional, utilitarian attitude to life.

In terms of the advantages of playing video games Playing educational games have some benefits for people such as improving problem-solving skills and arouse people's interest in learning.To begin with, by playing games, it can help them to train independent thinking. For example, people often face puzzles and problems which become tougher during games, so they can learn how to figure out the logic behind these problems and then deal with them.On top of that, some instructive applications can boost students' academic performance. For instance, BrainPop, an educational program that consists of interesting animated video, helps children and those who want to master English to enhance their language skills and reading comprehension.

Does this paragraph have problems? I want to use them in IELTS writing. Thank you! In terms of the advantages of playing video games- Playing educational games have some benefits for people such as improving problem-solving skills and arouse people's interest in learning.To begin with, by playing games, it can help them to train independent thinking. For example, people often face puzzles and problems which become tougher during games, so they can learn how to figure out the logic behind these problems and then deal with them.On top of that, some instructive applications can boost students' academic performance. For instance, BrainPop, an educational program that consists of interesting animated video, helps children and those who want to master English to enhance their language skills and reading comprehension. Thank you all so much!

Are sentences correct? Thank you! 1.While celebrating this festival, there are moon cakes which are regarded as indispensable/essential delicacies.Typical moon cakes are round pastries which are filled with red beans or yolk fillings that symbolize the full moon. 2.What I really like on this holiday was that I enjoyed eating barbecue with my relatives. For us, we spent quality time each other at this activity. Also, we had fun when we danced and sang around the grill. Thank you!!!