Could you please find out the grammar and fault The author holds the viewpoint that health service of communities are supposed to combine with psychological care.It is not suitable to seprate the diseases and patient. Doctors should treat the patient with both technology and psychological care,which is often ignored during the praction.The Auther suggests that doctors,who must get enough information about patients’ social context first,should treat patients as a real human but not an object.

This is a summary.thanks for your correction.best wished (this is a subtract from a Chinese essay with more than 1000 Chinese characters . Every word from yours is very helpful , thank you very much) This article focuses on the importance and development of psychological consultation .Some relevant investigations showed that about 70 to 80 percentages of college students have psychological problems and about 20.3 percentages have psychological disability.psychologically abnormal students are facing severe problems in study and social life.To solve the problem,every university keeps working on the psychological fitness of college students.Many universities in China have carried out a lot of activities related to the improvement of college student’s psychological fitness,such as giving literatures and talking with students. In some universities,Nanjing university,for instance,many students get into psychological clinic after class with the encouragement from each other and receive relief of psychological pressure.However,in other universities,quite a few students are still afraid of talking with a doctor or a teacher over their psychological troubles.To be worse,some students even hold psychological problems as something that can never be changed by other people.At the same time,other students consider that psychological consultation,which merely deals with problems superficially,can not clear out troubles from the root.These misunderstandings from students provide a chance for the transition from psychological disability to mental disease,which has taken away many lives. The psychological diseases of students committing suicides have a gradual development which has not been paid enough attention to.Thees poor students did not catch the importance of psychological consultation and felt depressed for a long time.Finally,this development arrived at its submit and erupted in the form of psychological diseases or suicide. Psychological consultation of universities has grown up to a special course and made contributions to students’ mental health.However,the short of specialist of psychological disease and the lack of the recognition from students are two major problems in front of us.

(Beg for your correction my friend)College student,psychological consultation is your friend (this is a subtract from a Chinese essay with more than 1000 Chinese characters . Every word from yours is very helpful , thank you very much) This article focuses on the importance and development of psychological consultation .Some relevant investigations showed that about 70 to 80 percentages of college students have psychological problems and about 20.3 percentages have psychological disability.psychologically abnormal students are facing severe problems in study and social life.To solve the problem,every university keeps working on the psychological fitness of college students.Many universities in China have carried out a lot of activities related to the improvement of college student’s psychological fitness,such as giving literatures and talking with students. In some universities,Nanjing university,for instance,many students get into psychological clinic after class with the encouragement from each other and receive relief of psychological pressure.However,in other universities,quite a few students are still afraid of talking with a doctor or a teacher over their psychological troubles.To be worse,some students even hold psychological problems as something that can never be changed by other people.At the same time,other students consider that psychological consultation,which merely deals with problems superficially,can not clear out troubles from the root.These misunderstandings from students provide a chance for the transition from psychological disability to mental disease,which has taken away many lives. The psychological diseases of students committing suicides have a gradual development which has not been paid enough attention to.Thees poor students did not catch the importance of psychological consultation and felt depressed for a long time.Finally,this development arrived at its submit and erupted in the form of psychological diseases or suicide. Psychological consultation of universities has grown up to a special course and made contributions to students’ mental health.However,the short of specialist of psychological disease and the lack of the recognition from students are two major problems in front of us.

What is healthy (thank you for your correction , best wish for you) (this is a summary of a Chinese essay with more than 1000 characters.Each piece of your advice is of great value , thank you for your scrutiny) Health of people includes two aspects,physical health and mental health.The definition of healthy from WHO indicates that a healthy person is supposed to not only have no physical disease but have an intact physical and mental condition to adapt to the society. Nowadays,in our country,most people,including patients and healthy people and even clinical practicer,ignore mental health consciously or unconsciously.However,mental health is as important as physical health and these two kinds of health supplement each other. With the social development,it is gradually becoming a prevalence to persue perfect health and longevity.but many medical specialists asume that the third condition which is between healthy condition and disease is the biggest barricade in the way of us persuing perfect health and longevity.Third condition is also called as sub-health condition. According to some revenlant investigation,with the high velocity of social development,it is inevitable to avoid the fact that the scale of people with sub-health condition is going up.Usually,the more achievement people get the more possible they suffer from sub-health condition. Exhaustion syndrome is a typical example of sub-condition health.No matter in developed or developing countries,lots of people are suffering from exhaustion syndrome with which people show little pain.But the latent impact of exhaustion syndrome should not be ignored,cause it can lead to many chronic disease,such as high pressure ,cardiac disease and tumor. It is important to adjust ourselves to fight against exhaustion syndrome since there is no effective medical therapy can be used to treat it.There are three key points worthy to be paid attention to:first,we should study and work with an easy mood.second,we should keep a appropriate and healthy diet.Last but not least,a good sleep really matters a lot.

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