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Please coorect my writing
Please native speakers of english, help me to improve my writing skills. It has been so long since we meet last time. I still recall our last conversation on the phone. You were and still are the most amazing humab being I ever had. You raised me to be who I am today. I will try to the best of me as you always had told me. Daddy was a great man; he had visions about the future. He is my hero and will be forever. Today, I choose to remember him by simling as he always did, be kind, be generous.
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The word surrounding us
Please correct my english. The picture was taken at a moment when I was in a complete silent and a deep thinking. I thought to my self what not to sure with other. Just thought to my self how I become very closed-minded sometimes and see one angle from an issue. If I had have taken a whole picture of the street, You would see a lot of pedestrians and kids are walking and eating their dinner ouside of restaurants. So I will always try to look outside of the box to the big picture. Always to sustain positive thinking. I know that my thoughts are not organized.But I'm trying to develop a habit of writing english everyday. Thank you all for your corrections in advance
2017年11月4日
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My journal for the Day-2,
Last night, I stayed up late until 3 in the morning. So I got up late this morning. Then, I went to work out for one hour. It's a good hapit to force yourself to excrise everyday no matter what your scedule is. Always make time for your health. The reason why because your health is a very cruical factor in order to achieve your goals. My focus today is to stay positive and motivated. I will try to learn something everyday as it is my job in this universe. I have been dealing with depression for many years and still, but I will beat him by staying positive and loving myself and others. Depression can kill you very slowly and take away your happiness and life. Let's beat him and win this battle. Thank you on advance for any corrections .
2017年11月4日
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My journey of the day
Today, I have decided to be determined about imprving my weakens. I wrote down all my weakens in a sheet of paper along with solutions to mitiagte them. I made this change today because i was listening to Tony Robbins in the morning, and he gave a very motivatioanl speech. It was a learning lesson for me and decided to make an action. Please correct my english thank you on advance
2017年11月3日
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