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Opinion Writing 2
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I do not agree with individual who claims that teachers affect children more than parents do. On the contrary, I do believe it is parents who play the most crucial role in children’s life, intellectually and socially.
These are my two reasons to bolster my opinion. First, children start to establish their IQ and EQ foundation at the early stage of their childhood. In terms of intellectual development, children’s academic ability originally comes from their parents. Parents having extraordinary ability might have a higher possibility to raise a gifted child and verse vice. In addition, young kids are building the concept of treating others, imitating the tone of speaking and obtaining the way of solving problem via observing their parents since they are toddlers.
Second, even though they are students, children spend longer time staying with family. In most of elementary school, students have 6-8 hours to learn at school, to socialize with friends, and to do extracurricular activities, but students have a range of 16-18 hours spending with their parents everyday. Practically, the time extends to 24 hours during the weekends, holiday, breaks and summer vocation. More importantly, students have the possibility to change teachers each school year. However, if students do not satisfy with parents, then there is no choice but stay with them. In other words, parents are parents who can influence their children in a long run.
Overall, the influence of teacher on children’s growth is very limited, yet parents have the responsibility to regulate, mentor and educate their children for the most part.
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Opinion Writing 2
I do not agree with individual who claims that teachers affect children more than parents do. On the contrary, I do believe it is parents who play the most crucial role in children’s life, intellectually and socially.
These are my two reasons to bolster my opinion. First, children start to establish their IQ and EQ foundation at the early stage of their childhood. In terms of intellectual development, children’s academic ability originally comes from their parents. Parents having extraordinary ability might have a higher possibility to raise a gifted child and verse vice. In addition, young kids are building the concept of treating others, imitating the tone of speaking and obtaining the way of solving problem via observing their parents since they are toddlers.
Second, even though they are students, children spend longer time staying with family. In most of elementary school, students have 6-8 hours to learn at school, to socialize with friends, and to do extracurricular activities, but students have a range of 16-18 hours spending with their parents everyday. Practically, the time extends to 24 hours during the weekends, holiday, breaks and summer vocation. More importantly, students have the possibility to change teachers each school year. However, if students do not satisfy with parents, then there is no choice but stay with them. In other words, parents are parents who can influence their children in a long run.
Overall, the influence of teacher on children’s growth is very limited, yet parents have the responsibility to regulate, mentor and educate their children for the most part.
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Opinion Writing Practice
I don’t agree with people who believe newspaper is the core channel to obtain information. However, I insist that convenient Internet is the first choice for the majority.
There are three reasons to bolster my opinion. First, the Internet is more user-friendly than the old-fashioned newspaper. People is able to read or browse millions entries at mainstream mobile phone applications anytime and anywhere. They can pinpoint the news that they are interested by using filter function. Second, getting information online is way much cheaper than buying newspaper everyday. People could be well informed without costing any cent. On the contrary, perhaps people have to get on the subway and run into a newsstand to wait to get a latest newspaper if they did not equipped with Internet access. Third, the online news is easier to store. People can save their favorite articles by clicking copy-and-paste without the concern of losing them as long as keep their phone or laptop as safe as possible. After reading the news, people could feel free to do something else. They do not need to organize, clean up and recycle the physical paper. Reading news online is efficient, low cost and good to environment.
Besides the three reasons I listed above, actually, the pros of using Internet to get information are countless. To reiterate my opinion, the tendency of replacing newspaper by Internet news is inevitable.
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Today is April 27, 2020. It is sunny outside; however, my inner world is a little cloudy. There are tons of things waiting for me to sort out: a meeting that makes me nervous, two classes that have sophisticated thoughts which I could not comprehend, and an difficult assignment due in two hours.
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