How could i shorten this sentence? As in, Brief it... I was right on time to watch my most favorite movie for the third time in three-dimension, and watched it with the same enthusiasm I had had when I first watched it.

tenses tenses! They're always a tension for me! And when I showed him my canvas, he at once knew that I did it in the loo. And I was crazy enough to feel proud of it; for I somehow felt that his best stories had had their making in the loo. God, I so love the loo! -> is this sentence right? when you're speaking in direct speech, narrating your story about a past? -> How could i make this more interesting?

i need help with tenses! “If ever I found the plants neglected when I return, you’ll have had it from me! Do you understand? ” That was mom again. Psychotic! -> i need to know if the tenses in this sentence fall in Place. -> And i'm doubtful if 'You'll have had it from me' is correct here.

A bad poetry day :( ...Can someone who can actually understand this poem, try to analyze its flaws and enlighten me with the same? I'd be grateful! Thank you. Moni:) SHE KNOWS IT ALL Say you really love, And you know that's lie, Without any armor, I come to you. Show me no mercy, Tell me what's pain, In more than just words, You show me. In every corner of her flesh, If you see, even from the corner of your eye, All you can see, Is a fairly strong human. The truth that they all know, and even carefully follow, Though they know that it's not truth anymore, but they still follow. For they know the truth That truth is god, And so they know, That truth does exist. Oh, show me no mercy, Tell me what's pain, YET... Even when without any armor, I come to you. It's then one morning, when you'll know, That you're cured for sure, And see things quite differently from ever before, Yes, you know it for sure, That you're cured. And then on a lonely morning, and another and another, And that when you hear an infant's cry, At last, you'll know, That she knows it all, No matter if she's tall, frail or small, For she's the purest of all.

About the usage of 'mostly so'. He threw up two more times before Karim agreed to stop, mostly so he wouldn't stink up his vehicle. -> What do you call 'mostly so'? say, Karim, here, is a Noun. What is ''mostly so'? ->Is there any other way of using it? other that, to mean, 'Mostly because'?

His dad would surely kill him, once he got to know about it. His dad would surely kill him, once he got to know about it. What other adverb can be used in place of 'once' apart from 'suppose'? or how can a sentence like this be made more interesting using grammar?

First notebook entry: C for conjunctions! i'm going mad about using conjunctions!