Social networks (please help me correcting this essay) it is for Ielts practicing, thank you Social networking nowadays has become very popular. People spend a great share of their day on such platforms. Despite the many advantages, this new technology has, many serious drawbacks also exist. This essay will discuss the dangerous issues and impacts social networks have brought to our life.

Social networks are usually open-access platforms, where any can join by providing few personal details. This humble mechanism of registration can be exploited by providing fake information. This easy access feature made

the networks vulnerable to be misused in different harmful methods. Some users would intentionally publish fake news which disturbs the peace of societies. Others use it to mess with people minds and opinions. In addition, some would use it to trade with illegal products. These acts caused many losses in life and money.

From my point of view, I would partially agree that this technology has enormous negative effects on our world. And the reason that made me agree in part is the certain possibility of making these networks more safe. This could be achieved if adminstrators of these networks apply strict policies and regulations. For instance, users have to provide certified and official identification documents in order to benefit from full access. These protocols would make it easy to reach individuals who cause the previously Drawbacks.

In conclusion, any tool can be misused if it was offered to the public without instructions and restrictions. Social networks could accomplish their intended goals of connecting a peaceful world by simply adopting some laws and a verified registration process.

please help my with corrections, thank you in advance The chart illustrates the differences in consumption rate of vegetables and fruit by men, women, and children in the UK for 8 years period from 2001 to 2008. It is clear that the overall intake of fruit and vegetables increased significantly during the mentioned period; despites the slight decrease in the last three years. In addition, women were the top of the three consumers of fruit and vegetables, followed by men then children. Women consumption has gradually increased from 2001 to 2006, to reach its top level of 35% of the whole consumption rate. That value represented twice that in the beginning of the period. Unlikely men and children showed constant rate of consumption for the first three years. Followed by gradual increment to reach its maximum in 2006 and 2007. Children intake rates were around 26% and men were 28%. As the differences in rates fluctuated over the period. Women consumed more than men by about 25% and more than children by about 50%. Those differences had doubled in 2003. Furthermore, men rates overcome that of children by 25% also. Thought those variations were in the first three years, it was reduced significantly in the last three years.

Post-school qualifications The chart illustrates the levels of different post-school potentials in Australia. and the percentage of males and females who held them in 1999. It is clear that skilled vocational diploma was held by most men, while it was the least for women. on the other hand, women overcame men with a high percentage of undergraduate diploma. Men possessed higher rates of percentage in Skilled vocational, postgraduate, and master degree. which were 90%, 70%, and 60% respectively. while women showed lower percentages of the the previous qualifications to be 10%, 30%, and 40%. On the other hand, women overcame men by possessing high rates of undergraduate and bachelor's degree qualifications. female constitutes about 70% of the undergraduate diploma. and 55% of the bachelor's degrees. while men had less than that by a half for the undergraduate diploma. and 5% less than women for the bachelor's degrees.

How to make your Facebook page popular. (please correct) Since four years i have unfollowed and banned lots of facebook pages for different reasons. some were not interesting, and some were publishing fake news like " A camera filmed a ghost". Since that time, i was in an isolate of what is happening around, and i followed limited kind of pages that mainly publish science, comedy, languages, and arts. also i don't watch T.v. which makes me unaware about what is happening in my country. once i was going to my work in the morning where i was surprised that the city where i worked had a terrorist attack the night before and the road were blocked. that day i walked for long distance to reach my work. Recently, i followed a page that investigate the news published by other pages. i was surprised by the number of fake news they were publishing, although some of them harm people and society in different ways. Those pages were publishing pictures and stories which are not exist. some were publishing pictures from terrorists attacks in other countries and were claiming they happened in my country. one of the fake news was a fire has started in the neighborhood where i live, and they put some pictures which i checked them using Google and the truth was a fire in China. some published pictures of the victims where i recognized some of them. they were my brother's friends. i told my brother and he told me it is not true, he checked on his friends and they were safe and never been to the explosion place for long time. those pages were stealing profiles pictures and publish them as they were the victims of the terrorist attack. I still don't understand why would they do this. they are playing with people's emotions. i thought of different reasons. some of the pages were sponsored which makes me think some people are behind this and trying to put pressure on the society. another reason that those who run these pages are trying to get more followers and likes, where they act like T.V channels and trying to make stories to attract people's attention. With the new feature in Facebook " live video" i was able to see some of those who run those pages. i watched their live videos and i concluded they are so ignorants to make fake stories and news. they were just copying and republishing stories from other pages. but still there are some pages who are professional in making fake news and some people, like those on Live videos, who spread them. This is my first note, please help me with correction thank you

How to make your Facebook page popular. Since four years i have unfollowed and banned lots of facebook pages for different reasons. some were not interesting, and some were publishing fake news like " A camera filmed a ghost". Since that time, i was in an isolate of what is happening around, and i followed limited kind of pages that mainly publish science, comedy, languages, and arts. also i don't watch T.v. which makes me unaware about what is happening in my country. once i was going to my work in the morning where i was surprised that the city where i worked had a terrorist attack the night before and the road were blocked. that day i walked for long distance to reach my work. Recently, i followed a page that investigate the news published by other pages. i was surprised by the number of fake news they were publishing, although some of them harm people and society in different ways. Those pages were publishing pictures and stories which are not exist. some were publishing pictures from terrorists attacks in other countries and were claiming they happened in my country. one of the fake news was a fire has started in the neighborhood where i live, and they put some pictures which i checked them using Google and the truth was a fire in China. some published pictures of the victims where i recognized some of them. they were my brother's friends. i told my brother and he told me it is not true, he checked on his friends and they were safe and never been to the explosion place for long time. those pages were stealing profiles pictures and publish them as they were the victims of the terrorist attack. I still don't understand why would they do this. they are playing with people's emotions. i thought of different reasons. some of the pages were sponsored which makes me think some people are behind this and trying to put pressure on the society. another reason that those who run these pages are trying to get more followers and likes, where they act like T.V channels and trying to make stories to attract people's attention. With the new feature in Facebook " live video" i was able to see some of those who run those pages. i watched their live videos and i concluded they are so ignorants to make fake stories and news. they were just copying and republishing stories from other pages. but still there are some pages who are professional in making fake news and some people, like those on Live videos, who spread them. This is my first note, please help me with correction thank you

what should follow "bring"? should " to " follows "bring" or not?? we can bring to them a smile again. we can bring them a smile again.

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what is the difference between await & wait??? what is the difference between await & wait???