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Yesterday, I had a picnic with my friend in Tokyo.The place was Yoyogi park and it is so big. The nature was so beautiful and nice weather. I made omulet and a lot of onigiri. we ate donuts and it was so delicious. After that, we took a walk around the park. There are many flowers and tree.They are so beautiful. There are very big dog run in the park. Many dogs are running. It was so cute.I love dog so if I had a dog I want to take him this place.I talked about we want to do in winter vacation with my friend. I have a lot of thing to do. For example,take a hot spring in Atami, go to Hokkaido and eat a lot of sea foods and go to a Disney sea and look very big Christmas tree and so on. If I think about many plans, I can’t wait for winter vacation. I really hope it comes soon.

Could someone help me with this? How do I say "Thank you so much" in Hindi? Is this right? आपका बहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद। /aapaka bahut-bahut dhanyavaad/ Thank you so much in advanced!