Mao
Written Exercise 65 -It Did Not Agree With Me! Yesterday, I planned on visiting a nice park but it rained most of the day. If the weather had agreed with me, I could have been out of home. If the weather had been good yesterday, I would have visited the park I planned on visiting. If I had visited the park, I would have shared what I could have seen in the park. Today, I have to go out and I hope it agrees with me!
2021년 3월 5일 오전 1:07
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Written Exercise 65 -It Did Not Agree With Me! Yesterday, I planned on visiting a nice park but it rained most of the day. If the weather had cooperated with me, I could have gotten out of the house. If the weather had been good yesterday, I would have visited the park I planned on visiting. If I had visited the park, I would have shared what I had seen. Today, I have to go out and I hope the weather cooperates with me!
2021년 3월 5일
Written Exercise 65 -It Did Not Agree With Me! Yesterday, I planned on visiting a nice park but it rained most of the day. If the weather had agreed with me, I could have been out of home. If the weather had been good yesterday, I would have visited the park I planned on visiting. If I had visited the park, I would have shared what I could have seen in the park. Today, I have to go out and I hope it agrees with me!
I wouldn't use 'agree with me' for weather. If the weather was kind to me... makes more sense to me. 'The onions (or other type of food) didn't agree with me' means that the onions made you feel unwell, and for me is a more usual use of 'agree with me'.
2021년 3월 5일
Written Exercise 65 -It Did Not Agree With Me! Yesterday, I planned on visiting a nice park but it rained most of the day. If the weather had agreed with me, I could have gotten out of the house. If the weather had been good yesterday, I would have visited the park I planned on visiting. If I had visited the park, I would have shared what I could have seen in the park. Today, I have to go out and I hope it agrees with me!
Hi Mao, well done. This was well written but I made a simple change to the ending of one sentence for you. Hope this helps
2021년 3월 5일
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