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I'm very proud of China.There are the following points.
There are many senses in it.Just like the forbidden city,which is one of the scenic spot in my mind.Besides,I am proud of Chinese food,not only can it make me delighted because of its variety，but it also very delicious.
As a chinese, it is more honored than proud.(如有错误，不吝赐教――来自一个英语小渣渣>_<)
2021년 8월 2일 오전 1:11
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I'm very proud of China because of the following points. There are many scenic spots in it, like the Forbidden City, which is one of the scenic spots in my mind. Besides, I am proud of Chinese food, not only can it make me feel delighted because of its variety, but it is also very delicious. As a Chinese, it is more of an honor than something I'm proud of. (如有错误，不吝赐教――来自一个英语小渣渣>_<)
Good job! :) 你的英语没有到渣渣这个程度啦，标点符号后记得空格哦！（： Anyway, I can help you improve your English. Please check out my teacher profile and feel free to book a lesson :)
2021년 8월 2일
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I'm very proud of China for the following reasons.
There are many senses in it. Just like the forbidden city, which is one of the scenic spots in my mind. Besides,I am proud of Chinese food. Not only can it make me delighted because of its variety， but it is also very delicious.
As a Chinese, it is more honored than proud.(如有错误，不吝赐教――来自一个英语小渣渣>_<)
Hi, I am not sure what you mean by "there are many senses in it" or "as a Chinese, it is more honored than proud." Is "it" referring to the food, the sensory experiences, or something else entirely? Or are you saying that you/do you feel are more honored than proud to be Chinese?
2021년 8월 2일
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