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The given map shows two suggested sites for the building of a new supermarket in Garlsdon city.
There are two possible places either inside of the city or on the outskirts.
Firstly, biggest area of the city is an industry where a railway line runs across the area from the east to the west.
In the middle of industrial part, there is Town Center with no traffic zone and two housing areas is located to the north and to the south.
Also, the city has three main roads running from the downtown to three disctricts: Hindon to north-east, Bransdon to south-west and Cransdon to south-east.
According to the map, a one proposal of the supermarket building layouts within the town center.
The second suggested site to the north-west of Garlsdon for the buliding is between a railroad line and main road to Hindon populated by 10 thousand people.
2020년 10월 12일 오후 8:19
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The given map shows two suggested sites for the building of a new supermarket in
Garlsdon city. There are two possible places, either inside of the city, or on the
outskirts. Firstly, biggest area of the city is industrial where a railway line
runs across the area from the east to the west. In the middle of industrial
part, there is the Town Center with a no traffic zone and two housing areas located
to the north and to the south. Also, the city has three main roads running from downtown to three disctricts: Hindon to north-east, Bransdon to south-west
and Cransdon to south-east. According to the map, one proposal of the
supermarket building layouts is within the town center. The second suggested site for the building is
to the north-west of Garlsdon between a railroad line and the
main road to Hindon populated by 10 thousand people.
Very good! Just some minor grammatical changes. This is complicated subject matter.
2020년 10월 12일
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2020년 10월 12일
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