Riman
Social media makes people less connected, and it weakens the communication between them, as people rely on social media to speak to others rather than meet them personally. Distant communication doesn’t have the ability to replace personal meetings between people, because the physical presence is important and reflects the interests of the other person. In my opinion, people are becoming more and more lonely as social media are disrupting the real and required communication among them.
2023년 11월 27일 오후 4:36
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Social media makes people less connected, and it weakens the communication between them, as people rely on social media to speak to others rather than meet in person. Online communication cannot replace face to face meetings between people, because the physical presence is important and reflects the interests(emotions) of the other person. In my opinion, people are becoming more and more lonely as social media are(is) disrupting the real and required communication among them.
I prefer to say, "social media is." But "social media are" may also be correct.
2023년 11월 28일
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