Hi everyone! I'd love to receive your corrections, thank you so much in advance. Today I went to one of my favorite places in Buenos Aires, Chinatown, in Belgrano neighborhood. After eating super d

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Hi everyone! I'd love to receive your corrections, thank you so much in advance. Today I went to one of my favorite places in Buenos Aires, Chinatown, in Belgrano neighborhood. After eating super delicious gyozas and an exquisite sushi mix, I bought this little box of cookies covered with white chocolate flavor =) There's nothing like such a delicious meal to make me feel like the happiest person in the world. Thank you Chinese people for inventing this extraordinary culinary creations!!! I'll be back! ;)

2025년 4월 17일 오후 10:03

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Hi everyone! I’d love to receive your corrections. Thank you so much in advance. Today, I went to one of my favorite places in Buenos Aires, Chinatown, in the Belgrano neighborhood. After eating super delicious gyozas and an exquisite sushi mix, I bought a little box of cookies covered in white chocolate flavor. =) There's nothing like such a delicious meal to make me feel like the happiest person in the world. Thank you to the Chinese people for inventing these extraordinary culinary creations! I’ll be back! 😉

Hi Vane! It sounds like you had a fantastic time in Chinatown! You did a great job capturing the delicious food you enjoyed, especially the gyozas and sushi. I loved how you expressed your happiness and appreciation for Chinese cuisine. For improvement, you could provide a bit more detail about the cookies you bought. Keep sharing your joyful experiences, as they are so enjoyable to read!

2025년 4월 20일 오후 10:48

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