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Yui
It was cool in the evening. So, I went to a destination by walk instead of my car. I could hear river sound and chorus of insects getting up there. Moreover, I could see stars in the sky. They made me feel happy and relax. I love stay in the nature.
2023년 9월 13일 오후 12:57
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It was a cool evening, so I walked to my destination instead of driving in my car. I could hear the sounds of the river and the chorus of insects while going there. Moreover, I could see stars in the sky. They made me feel happy and relaxed. I love being in nature.
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2023년 9월 13일
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It was cool in the evening. So, I went to a destination walking instead of using my car. I could hear river sounds and a chorus of insects getting up there. Moreover, I could see stars in the sky. They made me feel happy and relaxed. I love staying in nature.
2023년 9월 13일
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