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Lucia Bermudez LucyB
The picture is so beautiful, Made a sunny day, I took the picture last month in a away to the beach with my family members and friends The away was very fun specially to my son because he is likes so much the beach
2020년 11월 20일 오후 7:49
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The picture is so beautiful! On a sunny day last month, I took the picture on a trip (or getaway) to the beach with my family members and friends. The getaway was very fun, especially for my son, because he likes the beach so much.
Bastante bien... you could say "I took it", because you already referred to "the picture". "Trip" is more neutral, while "getaway" lets people know this was special.. something you probably planned and looked forward to.
2020년 11월 20일
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2020년 11월 22일
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