Riman
Advertising is the most important way that companies conduct to sell their products. Nevertheless , in our modernized and globalized world, we still need advertisements for various things like studying in universities and finding scholarships, and to find a good product. However, advertisements may be annoying sometimes when they get us to wait before using an application on the smartphone for example.
2024년 6월 12일 오후 7:12
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Advertising is the most important way companies sell their products. Nevertheless, in our modernized and globalized world, we still need advertisements for various things like studying at universities, finding scholarships, and good products. However, advertisements may be annoying sometimes when they make us wait before using an application on the smartphone for example.
You can also say it like this (MICHAEL's correction is right too, of course)
2024년 6월 15일
Advertising is the most important way (method/tool) that companies use to sell their products. Nevertheless , in our modernized and globalized world, we still need advertisements for various things like studying in universities and finding scholarships, and to find a good product also/ as well. However, advertisements may be annoying sometimes, when they get us to wait before using an application on the smartphone, for example.
2024년 6월 13일
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