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SIN KA HIM, Perry
Having fun to shop by instalment is always happy for the customer and the manufacturer, people can purchase a large amount of products by dividing many small payments for a longer time.
The using of instalment method to pay is especially important for the company to conduct business, it helps businessman to enhance the turnover rate that help expand company fast development and make a good return.
However, this method of payment can enlarge risk for company under the high interest rate and instable economic environment.
Many companies go bankrupt because of debt.
We can see instalment as a way of borrowing money from the future. A controllable use of it can help to faster achieve our goal, but we have to prepare the worst in the adverse effect of it
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2024년 8월 21일 오후 11:10
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Having fun shopping by installment is always a happy experience for the customer and the manufacturer. People can purchase a large number of products by making many small payments over a longer period.
Using the installment method to pay is especially important for companies when conducting business. It helps businessmen enhance the turnover rate, which aids in the rapid development of the company and ensures a good return.
However, this method of payment can increase risk for companies in a high-interest rate and unstable economic environment. Many companies go bankrupt because of debt.
We can see installments as a way of borrowing money from the future. A controllable use of it can help us achieve our goals faster, but we must prepare for the worst in its adverse effects.
Your writing effectively highlights the benefits and risks of using the installment method for business transactions. You did a great job explaining how it can enhance turnover rates and lead to rapid company development. For improvement, focus on subject-verb agreement and simplifying some phrases to enhance clarity. Keep up the good work!
2024년 8월 22일
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