Everyone has their own kind of morning routine but in my case this is what I prefer. First things first, after getting washed I go to roof to feed them. Even if I get a bit late they wait. I like to o

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Sudeshna

Everyone has their own kind of morning routine but in my case this is what I prefer. First things first, after getting washed I go to roof to feed them. Even if I get a bit late they wait. I like to observe them for a long time, it makes me feel good. And what else could make my morning good? Maybe a cup of tea.. ^^

2021년 1월 23일 오후 3:08

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Everyone has their own kind of morning routine but in my case this is what I prefer. First things first, after getting washed I go up to roof to feed the birds. Even if I am a bit late they wait. I like to observe them for a long time, it makes me feel good. And what else could make my morning good? Maybe a cup of tea.. ^^

2021년 1월 23일

Everyone has their own kind of morning routine but in my case this is what I like to do / prefer. First things first : after getting washed, I go to the roof to feed them /the birds. Even if I am /get a bit late they (will) wait. I like to watch /observe them for a long time, it makes me feel good. . and what else would /could make my morning good? Maybe a cup of tea.. ^^

Well-written, just a few suggestions for punctuation and alternative [better ?] words.

2021년 1월 23일

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