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My new job I got my job today.It is to be a course consultant about the stuff 's training courses in the bank. Few days ago.I opened a shop on the internet.(http://***.***.com)It was very hot in nanjing outside there.I invited my beautiful friend to be my model in the park.I took the pictures ,writing every details about the clothes and beautified many pictures.But when I finished it ,only several people come to have a look at.The promotion is so difficult.Perhaps,it just likes its name,it is only my hobby ,can not be my job or career.Then,I started to send my resumes on the internet,about teaching assistant and course consultant.Sadly,these institutions all must have to work on the weekend.Until today,I find this job.Though it will be so hard and I will have low salary in the begining,I believe next year everything will be ok.On the way back,I bought a JapaneseChinese-ChineseJapanese dictionary.I am ashamed of droping Japanese for a month and now I time to pick it up!
2013년 6월 20일 오전 11:33
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My New Job

I got a new job today. I'm now a It is to be a course consultant about for the staff 's training courses in a bank.

staff = workers; stuff = things.


A few days ago, I set up a shop on the internet online: .(http://***.***.com) It was very hot in Nanjing, where we took the photographs outside there. I invited my beautiful friend to be my model in the park. I took the pictures, wrote every details about the clothes and edited many pictures. Yet after I finished it, only a few people came to have a look at it. The Promotion is so difficult. Perhaps, it just likes its name, it shall be only my hobby, and can not be my job or career.

Don't worry too much - apparently, no-one visited eBay on its first day either.


Then, I started to send out my resumes on the internet, for teaching assistance or course consultation. Sadly, at these institutions everyone must has to work on the weekend. Until today, found find this job only today. Although it will be very hard and I will start with have a low salary in the begining, I believe next year everything will be OK. On the way back from work, I bought a Japanese-Chinese/Chinese-Japanese dictionary. I am ashamed of having dropped my Japanese for a month and now it's time to pick it up!

 

Good work. Just remember that in English, punctuation doesn't take up a full character-space like in Chinese, so you always need to add a space after a punctuation mark.

2013년 6월 20일

My new job

I got my succeeded in finding a new job today. It is  to be a course consultant about for the staff 's training courses in the bank.

A few days ago, I opened a shop on the internet (<a href="http://***.***.com).It">http://***.***.com).</a> <a href="http://***.***.com">It</a> was very hot in nanjing outside there. For advertising this shop, I invited my beautiful friend to be my model in the park. I took the photos pictures, writing wrote all the every details about the clothes, and beautified touched up many pictures. But when I had finished it, only several a very few people come to have a look at the web-site. The Promotion is so difficult. Perhaps, it just likes its name???, it is only my hobby, can not be my job or career.

Then, I started to send my resumes on the internet, looking for work as a about teaching assistant and of course consultant. Sadly, these institutions all must have to involve working on the weekend.  But today, I found this job. Even though it will be so hard and I will have a low salary in the beginning, I believe next year everything will be ok.

On the way back, I bought a JapaneseChinese-ChineseJapanese dictionary. I am ashamed of dropping Japanese for a month and now I have time to pick it up!

2013년 6월 20일
haha~Ta!Just like a sailor.
2013년 6월 20일
nice job....i hope u will be better :)
2013년 6월 20일
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