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My yesterday
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Yesterday was a holiday and it was a beautiful day because I saw a girl in my dream. So I woke up at 11 in the morning and I got felt fresh. Then i read the novel Revolution 2020 novel written by Chetan Bhagat. It is an amazing love story. Then After finishing the book, I took had lunch, and at noon I saw an old Oscar Award winning picture 'The Pianist'. Then I went to Sirimanu festival (a festival in my city) with my friends. After enjoying the festival we returned to home and played carrom and some online games. They My friends left in the evening night. Then I took my meal at 10.30 and I gone went to sleep.
Yesterday was a holiday and it was a beautiful day because I saw a beasutiful girl in my dream. I woke up at 11 in the morning and I felt fresh. Then i read the novel Revolution 2020 written by Chetan Bhagat. It is an amazing love story. After finishing the book, I had lunch, and at noon I saw an old Oscar Award winning picture 'The Pianist'. Then I went to Sirimanu festival (a festival in my city) with my friends. After enjoying the festival we returned home and played carrom and some online games. My friends left in the evening. Then I took my meal at 10.30 and I went to sleep.
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