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A bout my sister My younger sister, Olga, was born and raised in Ukraine as me. Аs a child she dreamed to become a model. When she was 17, she got married a guy from Ecuador and moved to live to Guayaquil with her husband. She lives in Ecuador for 4 years and she works as a model for 2 years. Her dream came true! She is a successful model in Ecuador, because she is a “white model” from Europe: she has blonde hair and blue eyes, she is tall and slim. I have never been in Ecuador yet and I haven't seen my sister for 4 years, but I often talk to her on Skype.
2013년 12월 30일 오후 10:41
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A bout my sister

My younger sister, Olga, was born and raised in Ukraine, as I was too/ same as me. Аs a child she dreamed to become of becoming a model. When she was 17, she got married to a guy from Ecuador and moved to live to in Guayaquil with her husband.
She lived in Ecuador for 4 years and she has worked as a model for the last 2 years. Her dream came true! She is a successful model in Ecuador, because she is a “white model” from Europe: she has blonde hair and blue eyes, she is tall and slim.
I have never been in to Ecuador yet and I haven't seen my sister for 4 years, but I often talk to her on via Skype.

 

<em>Because I was about to insert a 'the' before 'Ukraine' I was interested to read:</em>

Ukraine or the Ukraine: Why do some country names have 'the'?

<a href="http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/magazine-18233844">http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/magazine-18233844</a>;

2013년 12월 31일

About my sister

My younger sister, Olga, was born, and raised in Ukraine aslike me. Аs a child she dreameddreamt of becoming to become a model. When she was 17, she got married a guy from Ecuador, and moved to live to Guayaquil with her husband.
She lives in Ecuador going on for 4 years and, and has been she works as a model for 2 years. Her dream came true! She is a successful model in Ecuador, because she is a “white model” from Europe: she has blonde hair, and blue eyes, and also she is tall, and slim.
I have never been into Ecuador yet, and I haven't seen my sister for 4 years, but I often talk to her on Skype.

2013년 12월 30일
Maybe she'll invite you for a holiday?
2013년 12월 31일
she is really beautiful and her smile is charming
2013년 12월 31일
Wow, unbelievable
2013년 12월 30일
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