Happy New Year 2014!

Recently, I've been thinking about going on a working holiday. (no need for quotation marks)
I want to go to Canada or Australia in this year in order to For   
study English and  experience different cultures.  see the different world. 
I'm trying to save enough money to go and stay abroad.
I want to change my life.

Happy New Year 2014!

Recently, I've been thinking about a working holiday (no need for quotes!).
I want to go to Canada or Australia in this year,
to For study English and to see a the different world...
I'm trying to save enough money to go and stay abroad.
I want to change my life.

Happy New Year 2014!

Recently, I've been thinking about " working holiday".  "working holiday." The period goes inside the apostrophe, and "working" goes directly being the first apostrophe. 
I want to go to Canada or Australia in this year.
For To study English (OR "For studying English") and see the different world... It sounds a bit more natural to say "to see a different world."
I'm trying to save enough money to go and stay abroad.
I want to change my life.

Good work! As a Canadian, I hope you come to Canada. ^^