Tina lee
An Accident--Falling down When I was casually walking down the stairs I suddenly slid and hit my coccyx on the nosing part of the staircase three days ago. It really hurt and my mind was blank at that moment. I slowly stood up and felt the pain in my butt while hoping my bones didn’t broke My bones are good but the pain will last for several days. How I could be so careless. I blame on the slippery shoes.
2014년 7월 14일 오전 8:00
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An Accident--Falling down

Three days ago, when I was casually walking down the stairs, I suddenly slid slipped and hit my coccyx on the nosing(???) corner/ledge(?) part of the staircase three days ago. <em>(here the clause of time is too remote from the verb walking that it refers to)</em> It really hurt and my mind was went blank at that moment.
I slowly stood up and felt the pain in my butt while hoping I hadn't broken any bones didn’t broke
My bones are good No broken bones but the bruises and pain will last for several days. How I could be so careless. I blame it on the slippery shoes.<em> (reminds me of the sign in hotel toilets and bathrooms 'dan xin di hua! - it was then translated 'Be careful of landslide')</em>

2014년 7월 25일
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