12/27/2014
One day, I went to school. I walked along the street with hurried paces in the crowd. Something was in my mind. Suddenly, I couldn’t find a purchase and slipped.  When I recovered from my shock, I was sitting on the ground. I turned my head and saw a piece of banana skin lying on the ground. So, this is the one that made me slipped.

12/27/2014 (a futuristic diary?)
One day, when I went was on my way to school, I walking rapidly/quickly&nbsp; (alternatively just 'rushing') along the/a crowded street with hurried paces &nbsp;(the order is incorrect, and better to convert the phrases&nbsp;to the adjective and adverb)&nbsp;in the crowd. Something was in my mind. Suddenly, I couldn&rsquo;t find a purchase lost my footing and slipped. When I recovered from my shock, I found I was sitting on the ground. I turned my head and saw a piece of banana skin lying on the ground. So, I thought to myself&nbsp;this is the one that is what made me slipped.
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What is going on in that complex brain of yours Mila?&nbsp; What nade you write this?
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12/27/2014
One day, I went to school. I walked along the street with a hurried pace with in the crowd. Something was on my mind. Suddenly, I couldn&rsquo;t find my footing and slipped. When I recovered from my shock, I was sitting on the ground. I turned my head and saw a piece of banana skin lying on the ground. So, this is the one that made me slip.