Kumiko
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Awesome cherry blossom season I don't know anyone who doesn't like this season. Cherry blossoms are now in full bloom in Tokyo! Please take a look at the picture below. Maybe I need to improve my photo skills, though ;-) It's getting very warm and comfortable to enjoy walking outside. I brought my lunch box to a park and ate it under the bright sunshine. How wonderful today is! Please visit Japan and join me.
2015년 3월 30일 오전 5:19
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<em>Kumiko,</em>

 

<em>The blossom is indeed beautiful. Thank you for sharing. I was in Tokyo on Saturday and the blossom was really starting to bloom.</em>

 

<em>One correction in your post... I added "enough" after comfortable... using this advverb with comforatble when talking about a change (winter to spring, in your example) emphasizes that things are different and sounds more natural. Your English is awesome :)</em>

 

<em>Regards,</em>

 

<em>Jas</em>

 

Awesome cherry blossom season

I don't know anyone who doesn't like this season. Cherry blossoms are now in full bloom in Tokyo!
Please take a look at the picture below. Maybe I need to improve my photo skills, though ;-)

It's getting very warm and comfortable enough to enjoy walking outside. I brought my lunch box to a park and ate it under the bright sunshine.
How wonderful today is! Please visit Japan and join me.

2015년 3월 30일
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