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My lovely lazy dog I have a dog called cha cha. He is very lazy and he is sleeping now. Anyway, he is a lovely dog and I love him so much. However, I am lazy too. Not long ago, he went to general anesthesia for teeth cleaning. It is because I don't clean his teeth for a long time. So, he has so many odontolith on the teeth. And because of that, his level of liver enzymes was a little bit higher than the normal. Fortunately, I discovered early and bring him to consult the veterinarian. He is still health today.
2015년 4월 17일 오후 11:56
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My lovely lazy dog

I have a dog called cha cha. He is very lazy and he is sleeping now. Anyway, he is a lovely dog and I love him so much.

However, I am lazy too. Not long ago, ( I brought him) to general anesthesia for (his) teeth cleaning. It is because(of) I (didn't) clean his teeth for a long time. So, he has so many odontolith on (his) teeth. And because of that, his level of liver enzymes was a bit higher than the normal. Fortunately, I discovered early and (brought) him to consult the veterinarian. He is still health today.( now he is healthy.)

2015년 4월 18일

My lovely, lazy dog

I have a dog called Cha Cha. He is very lazy and he is sleeping now. Anyways, he is a lovely dog and I love him so much.

However, I am lazy too. Not long ago, he went to general anesthesia for a teeth cleaning. It is because I don't have not cleaned his teeth for a long time. So, he has so many odontolith on the teeth. And because of that, his level of liver enzymes was a little bit higher than the normal. Fortunately, I discovered this early and bring brought him to consult the veterinarian. He is still healthy today.

 

Very good job! This looks pretty good overall. I hope everything goes well with your dog, Cha Cha. Dogs are great friends.

2015년 4월 18일

My lovely lazy dog

I have a dog called cha cha. He is very lazy and he is sleeping now. Anyway, he is a lovely dog and I love him so much.

However, I am lazy too. Not long ago, he went to the veterinary clinic and had general anesthesia for teeth cleaning, . It is because I don't hadn't cleaned his teeth for a long time. So, he has so many too much odontolith/tartar on the teeth, and because of that, his level of liver enzymes was a little bit higher than the normal. Fortunately, I discovered this early and bring took him to for a consultation with the veterinarian. He is still healthy again today.

2015년 4월 18일
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