Jessie💞Isabella
Have you ever had illusions? You clearly remember that you did something, but it turns out you didn’t. This afternoon I went to the gym to work out. After I finished, I left the gym and headed for my scooter. I clearly remembered that I had pulled in the space in front of the gym where many other bikes and scooters parked. In my memory, I had found a pot near the sidewalk and parked it there. I even remembered that when I was parking and locking it, the sun was shining and I could hardly open my eyes. However, I couldn’t find my scooter at the place where I thought I had parked. I looked around and there was no trace of it. “Is it possible that I wasn’t thinking clearly? “ I asked myself. Then, I walked ahead to my apartment, and found my scooter downstairs. It turned out that I hadn’t ridden it to the gym at all. But that memory was so vivid, I couldn’t explain what happened to my mind. Did I just experience the so called parallel universes? I was in the first time space when I entered the gym, and then entered another time space when I came out of the gym? Haha!
2022년 4월 6일 오전 10:14
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Have you ever had illusions? You clearly remember that you did something, but it turns out you didn’t. This afternoon I went to the gym to work out. After I finished, I left the gym and headed for my scooter. I clearly remembered that I had pulled in the space in front of the gym where many other bikes and scooters parked. In my memory, I had found a pot near the sidewalk and parked it there. I even remembered that when I was parking and locking it, the sun was shining and I could hardly open my eyes. However, I couldn’t find my scooter at the place where I thought I had parked. I looked around and there was no trace of it. “Is it possible that I wasn’t thinking clearly? “ I asked myself. Then, I walked ahead to my apartment, and found my scooter downstairs. It turned out that I hadn’t ridden it to the gym at all. But that memory was so vivid, I couldn’t explain what happened to my mind. Did I just experience the so called parallel universe? I was in the first time space when I entered the gym, and then entered another time space when I came out of the gym? Haha!
This is great! Your English is at a great level, so hardly any corrections needed here 😊
2022년 4월 6일
Have you ever had delusions? You clearly remember that you did something, but it turns out you didn’t. This afternoon I went to the gym to work out. After I finished, I left the gym and headed for my scooter. I clearly remembered that I had pulled into the space in front of the gym where many other bikes and scooters were parked. In memory, I had found a spot near the sidewalk and parked there. I even remembered that when I was parking and locking it, the sun was shining and I could hardly open my eyes. However, I couldn’t find my scooter where I thought I had parked. I looked around and there was no trace of it. “Is it possible that I wasn’t thinking clearly? “ I asked myself. Then, I walked to my apartment and found my scooter downstairs. It turned out that I hadn’t ridden it to the gym at all. But that memory was so vivid, I couldn’t explain what had happened in my mind. Did I just experience the so-called parallel universes? I was in the first time-space when I entered the gym, and then entered another time-space when I came out of the gym? Haha!
Corrected by GuideDogSaint. Many thanks to him!
2022년 4월 7일
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