Amélie Aya
Does My sentence make sence?
I told my friend about the incident which is took place at railway station. But my friend didn't buy it.
2021년 8월 20일 오후 5:06
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Does my sentence make sense ?
I told my friend about the incident at the railway station but (s)he didn't buy it.
'which took place' is redundant i.e. unnecessary ; the second sentence can be combined with the first, and you should avoid starting a sentence with the word 'but'.
'didn't buy it' is a slang expression meaning 'didn't believe it'
2021년 8월 20일
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Does My sentence make sence? I told my friend about the incident which is took
place at railway station. But my friend didn't buy it.
Does my sentence make sense?
I told my friend about the incident which took place at the railway station, but my friend didn’t buy it.
Your were mostly correct:)
2021년 8월 20일
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Does My sentence make sense?
Google translate: I told my friend about this incident that took place at the train station. But my friend didn't buy it.
Source: I told my friend about the incident which is took place at railway station. But my friend didn't buy it.
2021년 8월 20일
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Hi Amelie
I told my friend about the incident that took
place at the railway station. But he didn't buy it.
(she if it's a girl obviously)
2021년 8월 20일
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Correction: I told my friend about the incident (which took place) at the railway station. But my friend didn't buy it.
Yes, it makes sense.
2021년 8월 20일
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