Kim Wi
Do you do housework at home?
Yes. Although I have to study, but when I free time I always help my parents with household chores. We all think that sharing housework is a great way to reduce the collective burden and help develop a sense of responsibility towards family. i often give a hand with my mother mop the floor and clean the home or bathroom. Sometimes I do a meal for my family because my parents have a lot of work as well. I feel so happy because I can do something to help my family
2022년 8월 8일 오후 12:08
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Do you do housework at home? Yes. Although I have to study, when I have free time,
I always help my parents with household chores. We all think that sharing
housework is a great way to reduce the collective burden and help develop a
sense of responsibility towards family. I often give my mother a hand mopping the floor and cleaning the home or bathroom. Sometimes I make a meal for my family because my parents have a lot of work as well. I feel so happy because I can do something to help my family.
That's beautiful that you help your family so much and that it makes you happy to help them. You wrote this well!
2022년 8월 8일
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Do you do housework at home?
Yes. Although I have to study, I always help my parents with household chores when I have free time. We all think that sharing housework is a great way to reduce the collective burden and help develop a sense of responsibility towards family. I often give my mother a hand with mopping the floor and cleaning the home or bathroom. Sometimes I make a meal for my family because my parents have a lot of work as well. I feel so happy because I can do something to help my family.
You don't need to use "although" and "but" in the same sentence. One is sufficient :)
2022년 8월 8일
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