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Dujiangyan water conservancy project 都江堰水利工程 Dujiangyan water conservancy project built 2200 years ago, it is a national 5A-level scenic spot, a world cultural Heritage site, and one of the oldest water conservancy projects in the world. it works well in nowadays. 都江堰水利工程建于2200年以前,它是5A级旅游景点和世界文化遗产,是世界上最古老的水利工程之一。一直沿用至今。
2024년 6월 22일 오전 11:53
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Dujiangyan water conservancy project 都江堰水利工程 Dujiangyan water conservancy project, built 2200 years ago, is a national 5A-level scenic spot, a world cultural Heritage site, and one of the oldest water conservancy projects in the world. It works well even today. 都江堰水利工程建于2200年以前,它是5A级旅游景点和世界文化遗产,是世界上最古老的水利工程之一。一直沿用至今。
Minor changes in punctuation, removal of an article "it," and capitalization were needed to make the sentences correct. The last sentence "it works well in nowadays" is incorrect and best changed to "It works well even today" or "Even today, it works well" to share the idea that it is amazing and awesome that the project runs well after thousands of years. The overall idea was still conveyed well 👍.
2024년 7월 29일
Dujiangyan water conservancy project 都江堰水利工程 Dujiangyan water conservancy project built 2200 years ago, it is a national 5A-level scenic spot, a world cultural Heritage site, and one of the oldest water conservancy projects in the world. it works well in nowadays. 都江堰水利工程建于2200年以前,它是5A级旅游景点和世界文化遗产,是世界上最古老的水利工程之一。一直沿用至今。
Dujiangyan water conservancy project **was** built 2200 years ago. It is a national 5A-level scenic spot, a world cultural heritage site, and one of the oldest water **conservation** projects in the world. It works well nowadays. (There is no “in” before “nowadays”) ((Good job! I agree that it’s a lovely spot. I’ve visited it! ❤️))
2024년 6월 22일
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