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One of my colleagues resigned at the beginning of this month, because he will return to university for his doctor degree on September. Everyone is pleased for his doctor entrance to university. He went back home recently and sent a gift from his hometown for every coworkers in our office. I got a cute smile refrigerator magnet. My favorite gift is the Chinese style beauty and It was pretty beautiful! But I'm late a little, so others got them. Which do you like?
这个月初，我的一个同事辞职了，因为九月他将要回到大学攻读博士学位。每个人都为他收到博士入学通知书感到高兴。他最近回家了，并且给我们办公室的每一个同事寄来一份礼物。我拿了一个可爱的笑脸冰箱贴（图2）。其实，我最喜欢的礼物是中国风美女（图1，第二个娃娃）, 它太漂亮了！但是我晚到了一步，其它人挑走了。你们喜欢哪一个？
2024년 8월 6일 오전 11:38
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Earlier this month, one of my colleagues resigned because he will return to university to study for a doctorate in September. Everyone was pleased that he received his doctoral admission. He recently went back home and sent a gift to each coworker in our office. I got a cute smile refrigerator magnet. However, my favorite gift was the Chinese style beauty. It was so beautiful! But I was a little late, and another got it. Which do you like?
这个月初，我的一个同事辞职了，因为九月他将要回到大学攻读博士学位。每个人都为他收到博士入学通知书感到高兴。他最近回家了，并且给我们办公室的每一个同事寄来一份礼物。我拿了一个可爱的笑脸冰箱贴（图2）。其实，我最喜欢的礼物是中国风美女（图1，第二个娃娃）,
它太漂亮了！但是我晚到了一步，其它人挑走了。你们喜欢哪一个？
Congratulations to your colleague 🎉👨🏻🎓! Some small changes in tenses and syntax but otherwise well done! 👍
2024년 8월 8일
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