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Parenting is extremely important in life, but unfortunately, it is sometimes underestimated. In my opinion, the best gift parents can offer to their children is a good upbringing.
A good upbringing is not about spoil your children and give them everything they want. On the contrary, it is about making them have experiences in life along with giving them support and advice. Moreover, it is crucial that parents work on their children’s personality to make them brave and polite and to make them poses high manners.
In addition, parents can encourage their children to learn skills and to develop their talents, and to give them out on a family trip. This latter act solidify the bonds between the family’s members.
2024년 2월 25일 오후 2:05
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Parenting is extremely important but unfortunately, it is sometimes underestimated. In my opinion, the best gift parents can offer to their children is a good upbringing.
A good upbringing is not about spoiling your children and giving them everything they want. On the contrary, it is about allowing them to have experiences in life along with giving them support and advice. Moreover, it is crucial that parents work on their children’s personality to make them brave and polite and mannerly.
In addition, parents can encourage their children to learn skills and to develop their talents. Also, family outings can solidify the bonds between the family’s members.
2024년 2월 26일
Parenting is extremely important in life, but unfortunately, it is sometimes underestimated. In my opinion, the best gift parents can offer to their children is a good upbringing.
A good upbringing is not about spoiling your children and giving them everything they want. On the contrary, it is about making them experience life along with giving them support and advice. Moreover, it is crucial that parents work on their children’s personality to make them brave and polite and to make them possess good manners.
In addition, parents can encourage their children to learn skills, to develop their talents, and to go on family trips. This last act solidifies the bonds between the family members.
I'm not sure what you meant by "and to give them out on a family trip." Since the sentence starts with "parents can encourage their children...", find a phrase that matches the structure. "Parents can encourage their children to learn skills, to develop their talents, and to go on family trips" could be what you meant. "Latter" means the second one of TWO mentioned things, so don't use it when you mention three things beforehand. Awesome job overall with this response!
2024년 2월 25일
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