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2023년 3월 15일
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Reading..., two approaches may sound reasonable: jail terms and rehabilitation programs. I believe that rehabilitation programs are more practical and effective when... It is true that some rehabilitation programs such as educating and training the wrongdoers are able to help them to be better citizens. Specifically, due to the lack of abilities of making a living, offenders may do something wrong or even break the laws again in order to survive, such as theft or robbery, and that seems to be the main reason why most people commit crimes. By receiving professional education or vocational training, lawbreakers are capable of learning personal skills or specific job skills, which enable them to gain a job with steady incomes, therefore reducing the possibility of re-offending. In addition, education and training have no effect on their work or study in the future, because imprisonment tends to be a criminal record. If rehabilitated prisoners have the chance to enter a promising company or receive higher education but are rejected just because they used to be a criminal. It is harmful to the distribution of human resources in society. As a result, education and job training not only prepare offenders for career opportunities but also enable them to be more responsible members of society. However, as a form of punishment, imprisonment is an essential punishment. It reduces the crime rate to a large extent owing to deterrence. Due to the fear of penalty, people are more likely to stop offences or recidivism. Moreover, through Jailing Criminals who are recidivists or doing grave crimes like murder, terrorism or rape, victims or witnesses are safe and avoid suffering revenge. Also, it makes sure hardcore criminals cannot pose a threat to other citizens. For these reasons, I think that providing education or training to them is an effective method than imprisonment in dealing with wrongdoers committing minor crimes. But regarding serious criminals, they must be jailed.
2021년 9월 4일
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✔ Promoting healthy lifestyle and providing treatment, which is more important? They are both important. Admittedly, spending public money promoting a healthy lifestyle is imperative. Researches worldwide have consistently shown that there is a strong correlation between prevalent of certain disease and an unhealthy lifestyle. For instance, lack of physical exercise and eating fast food regularly might lead to obesity which contributes to a range of cardiovascular disease. Smoking and drinking directly cause countless disease, and obviously in that list, the most scary and painful one must be Cancer. When governments invest more in promoting a healthy lifestyle, Such as launching awareness-raising campaigns through TV or advertisement, paying celebrities to give public speeches and building more sport facilities, ordinary citizens will become better informed the link between health and lifestyle choices and the result of this is likely to general decline the risk of contracting Said diseases.   However, providing treatment for those who are already sick is equally important. Many diseases are inherited by faulty genes, or simply have something to do with environmental pollutions or ageing and have nothing to do with lifestyle. In other words, people who have these conditions have done absolutely nothing wrong, meaning that they deserve the government-subsided treatment at public or private medical institutions. Patients whose diseases are caused by an unhealthy lifestyle are also need to be cured, because it is unethical to deny their desperately needs when they suffering. Also, allocating public money to treating those patients is possible to develop some new therapies to relieve their pain. In that case, patients with mild diseases are easier to be cured and some serious and incurable diseases may have the chance to be cured compared with the past, such as polio. Such advantages are shared for people all over the world.
2021년 9월 1일
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2021년 8월 29일
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Hi~😊everyone, could you please help me to correct my article~↓↓↓❤ While it is viewd by some people that spending more public money on promoting healthy lifestyle are more imperative instead of spending it on treatment for people who are already sick. From my point of view, a flexible approach is preferred. It should be admitted that spending more in order to make people having a healthier lifestyle features multiple benefits. To be Specific, owning a healthy lifestyle, which is improving personal health, people are able to reduce the incidence of disease, therefore promoting the health level of the country's population. For example, an unhealthy diet can cause various health problems, such as obesity, diabetes and heart disease, which are increasing in many countries, increasing the burden on public medical systems. Also,those chronic diseases will have an adverse impact on people's life span. Investing capitals on medical treatment for people , especially for those getting sick already, however, also is an indispensable part. Everyone has access to the same quality of medical care and treatment, So those people getting illness do . They also pay the tax and make contributions to society, and they want to be cured as well, meaning that the rights of them can not be ignored . In addition, expensing more on researching the treatmentare capable of improving the overall level of social medical techniques. As a result, people with mild illnesses are able to be cured easily instead of becoming exacerbated. Some serious disease might have the chance to be curable , such as polio, which is an incurable disease in the past but now being sovled. such advantages are shared for people all over the world. In Conclusion, both methods are significant, and it shoud not be only focusing on one aspect. It seems better to pay the same attention and money on both.
2021년 8월 19일
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