Are both of these sentences correct ? In 2010, the percentage of women who smoked is 25. In 2010, the percentage of women smoked is 25.

Could someone help me by correcting this paragraph? The youth of today are the most affected side by new technology. They didn't get used to it when they were little because the technology wasn't that much advanced. Currently, most jobs are high demanding jobs. It needs people to be able to use modern technology. Youth should develop themselves on a regular basis but that shouldn't take most of their effort and thinking. Most people have jobs for a living but they should have time for recreation.

Could someone help me by correcting this paragraph? People agree about the importance of working out, but they disagree about what kind of exercises we should do. There is a claim that bodybuilding exercises have a negative impact on the body, especially for backbone and joints. People say walking or running for some time in the morning is enough. In my opinion, it's not a problem doing back, chest and other exercises without using weights.

Could someone help by correcting this paragraph? Relationships end for all sorts of reasons. Ending a relationship, doesn't matter what kind of relationship is, hurts. I guess the most hard, painful one to be ended is love relationship/affair. Anyone who goes deeper in thinking as an attempt to understand the truth about life knows that it's some kind of destiny that some relationships work and some don't. The most important thing is to look at that as a part of destiny. Some people accuse each other of ruining the relationship, and as a result of that thinking, they try to take revenge on the other side. I watched an imaginary story in a horror movie about someone who wanted to get revenge on her deaf-mute ex-girlfriend. That story embodies what sometimes happens in reality.

Are these sentences correct to express that I rode the bicycle for two years two years ago ? I went bicycling two years ago. I rode the bicycle many times two years ago. I used to ride a bicycle.

Could someone help me with correcting this paragraph? Most people like to work out, but there are many factors which impede them from doing that. For instance, lacking of lit streets which contain sidewalks for those who like walking , lacking of public services such as washrooms for those who walk for long distance, and high subscription price of going to gyms. Playing sports has an impact on  people's health and mood. It provides them with feelings of being strong. It saves them from falling into that dirty world of drugs. Authorities, all over the world, must provide facilities which incite everyone to exercise without paying.